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I'm... I'm just a little mad here... There are too many Spidermen with Symbiotes or are a symbiote... I'm not even reading this. Jeffery, Lee, and even some other dude I don't care about have done it. I'm pretty mad that you did this, as I was gonna have my Displaced Venom become Agent Venom later.
All I'm saying is that I'm really pissed...
Well, the worst that could happen... I don't want to think about.
In the synopsis:
"There" = "they're" (both instances of it).
I'm pretty sure the protagonist's name is Barry. Like, 90% sure.
Also...
What? I don't understand this line of dialog. What was he trying to convey to us?
You know... My story out for like a week, gets good reviews.
Your stories out for like four hours and gets more likes comments and reviews overall...
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=NrKE_eTMlns
you have peaked my interest please continue
Oh my thisis interesting there is a second venom running around. This makes the symboites that are running around already going to have stroke trying to figure this out. Well this is awsome either way
Aliens
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*looks at coverart, recoiling in shock and horror*
You sent Deadpool with the Venom symbiote to Equestria!?!?!
how did berry swing the buildings in ponyville aren't that tall? well some are but not many.
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Most of the buildings are small but technically SpiderMan has done the same. It would be reasonable for Barry to be able to at least web zip and swing along the buildings.
6399048 i guess your right now that i think about it in the spider man 3 game with practice and skill you can swing on small trees soim not going to ask about this anymore
Took me long enough to comment but:
1) Kudos for being the first one to make a Agent Venom Crossover, wished its was the actual Flash Thompson buuut beggars cant choose.
2) I really hope you make the Symbiote a character in itself, that little annoying devil in your shoulder.
3) Any plan for a post purification Venom?
check the grammar in general and uou kept repeating Barry over and over again during the chase, try using "he" instead.
also cant Celestia order the guard to not kill Barry at sight?
6431766 YA....princess's guards that doesn't listen to the princess are useless guards....especially when that princess is a leader of the country and at time protector of the country itself.
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1) Thank you! I may make an actual Agent Venom crossover!
2) Already done!
3) That may be in the sequel I already have planned. Who knows that might be the ending of this story!
6396325 When I see his name I think of Chuckle Vision and then I laugh to myself and think "to me" "to you" XD
I thought Venom only refers to itself as "We" when it's talking about itself and its host. When it refers to itself it's just a singular entity.
Digging the rewrite, still have some minor errors but very improved from the first attempt (wow, that came out more jerkish than i wanted),.
say, i had some displaced-ish ideas i wanted to try, just to try my luck at writing, is there anyway i can make them without being canon so i can take some liberties on it?
Love the story so far cant wait for next chapter
love it more please
Is this story dead?
please continue this story
It is weird coming back and reading this. Christ. And yes I am Monstercat, just switched accounts XD
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