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NoGoodUsrNames99


Trying to improve my writing. Please critisize my stories, old or new!

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Butter Berrys is a complete wreck. He's never had true love, until one day he meets Glimmering Dusk. She's everything he's ever wanted, she's tall, Shy, and perfect! Now he must work to get a date with her, but it goes worse than terrible when Berrys find out the truth...

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Comments ( 11 )

Woah...that was a twist I wasn't expecting!

6509626 I wasn't expecting it either! I usually make it up as I go, and it surprised me too!

6509632 You know it's a great twist if it surprises the Author!

This was great! :pinkiehappy: Keep up the great work!

Berrys

Never learned about plurals for words ending in Y, huh? More than one berry = "berries".

6510301 Actually I have, I misspell it on purpose.

Well that got dark really fast!

Comment posted by NoGoodUsrNames99 deleted Jan 25th, 2016
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