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I like it so far.
Really? The ponies of Ponyville are that easily convinced of stuff? Well, shouldn't be that much of a surprise. *cough cough*Flim and Flam*cough cough*
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Pfft. The ponies of Ponyville are stupid.
It actually went better than the expected!
'Twas beautiful. Bravo.
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This was really nice! A great little slice of life and concept exploration at the same time. I love seeing earth pony magic. ^^ Good job!
Bravo!
Very well done, this is one of the best depictions of Equestrian magic I've seen on this site.
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Thanks for the feedback. I struggled with 'people' vs. 'pony' in that line. There is a 'pony' in the line before and 'everypony' in the line after. Three lines in a row with pony references felt cliched when I reviewed it. I will work harder to keep humanized references to a minimum in the future.
Magical is my first story that to get to the Popular Stories list on the front page, if only for a little while. Thanks to everyone for the views, likes, favs, and comments!
They need a episode like this.
7312526 Thank you, that is high praise indeed!
You've already seen my review of this; I'm just popping in to finally give you the upvote this story deserves!
7908913 Thank you for the review, the upvote, and the feedback!
Aww that was heartwarming!