While fighting Bowser in his castle, the Mario Brothers get send to another dimension by Kamek's powerful spell with the aid of power stars collected by the koopa troop.
Meanwhile, Princess Twilight returns to the human world to visit her Canterlot High friends. But when she received a welcome, the bros gets teleported in the same world.
With no hope of returning home, Mario and Luigi may have to settle in the human world as their new home and maybe become new students of Canterlot High.
LET'S A GO
( Takes place between MLP EG:RR and MLP EG: FG )
My Little Pony: Equestria Girls belongs to Hasbro
Super Mario belongs to Nintendo
Author: Hi guys. I'm back and my apologies for keeping this story shelved for quite a while. I had big slack off but right now I feel some revitalization back reading some Fimfics of Sonic X MLP EG crossovers and some Mario X MLP comic on youtube. I hope y'all forgive me. Keep in mind that I'm currently editing parts of the story while it is published so sorry if my story is making little to no sense.
This sounds pretty fun I actually own the Nintendo 3DS mario game so yes this should be a great read. I will be keeping an eye on this one.
Thanks. This is my first story so I'm pretty much learning.
Not gonna lie I'm intrigued
Ok this was just a bit too funny I think i might have to reread this just for the laughs this was great. Loved it very much keep it up
Ahh, Mario Super Sluggers. I used to had that game.... until my brother stepped on it by accident.
Im going to keep reading this
Gonna keep an eye on this story
Pretty good. I'm a huge Mario Bros fan. So I will keep my eye on this.
Nice. This is really good.
I think you mean How instead of Hoe.
Well Mario and Luigi's first day is going pretty well.
But in all seriousness, I don't how American school works, but please tell me you cannot just casually walk in a school and just like that be enrolled in it.
Find some mistakes.
here
white and purple stripes shirt
You hit "enter" instead of "space".
and this is Luigi.
new guys that are here
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Eh, I'm okay with the ships. I just find it strange they aren't acting more reserved knowing that they are actually in their forties. but I think we can put that on the account they're teenagers again and hormones are already messing things up.
Mistakes found:
gettin' / comin' An apostrophe must be place to indicate the absence of the "g".
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The name is usually written with two "o". But since this is pretty much free to interpretation, you decide if you want to change or not.
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I think you wanted to say "I'm sure you are new."
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Okay. I fixed it. PANT PANT. GASPED (THUD). I'm okay.
Luigi and fluttershy makes sense kinda on the fence with applejack but we'll see
Still intrigued with what's going to happen next also I imagine rainbows face when she sees the bros on a track and field event or something will be hilarious
7768133 honesty that's a cliche that always bugs me in most stories not just here but in general, but no you actually have to go through the normal paperwork that has to be done by any legal Guardian, despite this I still find this story nice
7769170 considering they were in the Olympic games with Sonic and he's team ,I have to agree with you
Umm, okay BronyPro2402. Please bear with me cause ,again, I'm really new at this.
Pretty good start. Interesting to see Mario and Luigi in school.
I'm still around, people. Just needed some motivation and ideas for my story.
I assure you, I WILL NOT GIVE UP!!!
7751345 I know how you feel. My brother scratched my Super Smash Bros. Brawl on the wall without me knowing but I did buy another copy.
8024721 Yeah, well right now I am just doing little by little almost in the middle of the night. That is pretty much the only time I'm typing. Just need motivation.
Nice to see this story back. It's been three months, but don't worry it isn't that long of a wait.
Well seem the brothers are doing quite fine with their respective host. Angel is still a jerk and Big Mac is overly protective of his sisters, though that seems unnecessary toward AJ since she more than capable of defending herself.
I'm kinda a little septic having AJ and Mario harvesting the apples by kicking the trees like the ponies. The ponies can do it because of magic, but here they would most likely be picking them, cause kicking the trees would normally hurt them and bare no results.
Found some mistakes.
*unneeded space*
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Very nice.
8029362 Thanks for the heads up. I'll fix the mistakes and I'll see if I can redo the part where Mario was picking the apples quickly.
nice to see this back hope my suggestions helped
*you're or you are
Also I did see the trailer I am so excited
8031576 Whoa slow down. Right now I need to pause the story, re edit chapter 3, and fix some mistakes Black Knight pointed out.
I'm just going little by little. No hard feelings, okay, cause its almost hard for me to make time. Pretty much the only time I'm typing (or texting in this case) is in the middle of the night. But hey, I don't plan on stopping the story. Just need motivation and ideas for the next chapter. Hope you guys understand.
8033574 Thanks. Now I need some sleep cause Its like 1 a.m.
8030216 What suggestions you have in mind? Cause I was thinking of Rainbow challenging Luigi in a sport then a fight. (Dash knows karate, right?)
Or a Mario chapter when Rarity has a problem.
And also adding a little from the Mushroom Kingdom. When some of his friends are wondering where are the Mario Bros.
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well that depends how you are going to portray the challenge is it going to be a straight fight ? if so which games are you gonna base luigis abilities from EX: super smash brothers or the mario and luigi series (p.s. if you do smash brothers pls for the love of faust make sure to include his side taunt, nothing is more hilarious than dodging an attack using that )
also for marios chapter with rarity I can imagine him with some sorta last minute surprise dinner party for some extremely important guest then make a perfect elegant itallian dinner with him in a tux and perfect manners
as for the mushroom kingdom thing im not sure there maybe have the minions realized bowser has actually won one over on mario and some have been taking bets along those lines or something
8039640 Well...wow. You are really good at suggestions. I think I'll do a Luigi chapter for this one. But first: I thought you meant when he just shrugs and kicks the floor. (I'm not sure if that hurts in SSBWiiU) .
Speaking of fights, I was thinking of Mario and Luigi's fighting style. I am pretty neither can use a fireball, their up (B) attack, or for Luigi do Green Missile cause he is in the human world. I'm gonna try to put a little Smash Bros into this.
On another subject, I mentioned earlier in first or second chapter that I'm gonna do a kind of a love triangle for each of the Mario Bros.
For example: (Rainbow Dash X Luigi X Fluttershy)
Reason: RD kind of reminds me of Daisy cause she's energetic and they are both a bit of a tomboy.
(Applejack X Mario X Rarity)
Reason: Rarity, sorry if I said 'remind me' so many times, in a way resembles Pauline(I think you should look her up in case you're not sure who she is. Try Mario vs DK: March of the Minnies.) They're both beautiful and elegant and just thought I give it a shot.
Let me know, dude.
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Thank you * bows* thank you * bows* I aim to please anyways you're thinking of his down taunt ( which does 1% but has high knock back) I'm talking about his side taunt which is him just planking wherever he stands.
And that's fair them not having fire balls and no green missles but you should at least leave their jumping abilities be ( it's kinda their main thing man).
Also you should put more emphasis on smash cause the mario and Luigi series usually use weapons or magic that aren't directly theirs
One last thing yes I know the shipping triangle both old and current I suggested the new one remember? And don't think I didn't see the parallels why do you think I suggested them in the first place well good luck
Peace out and spin-on
8039971 Yo. About Luigi's side taunt. I'm actually having a bit of trouble with that...hahaha. Just need an idea on how to make good use of that taunt.
And I agree about putting more of their SSB fighting moveset. I'll probably be putting some references from SSB WiiU. Now for me to play SSB WiiU and beat everyone with Mario.
Are you going to add penguin suit chopper shroom and giant shroom
8079582 Pretty much but, again, in later chapters. Right now, I'm just doing little by little.
I'm doing some plots of where Mario and Luigi are getting used to their new lives since they think that there is no way they could return home. While the other is that in the mushroom kingdome where Peach, Daisy, Yoshi, and the rest of the heroes get a bit worried and decide to search the brothers.
Hey dude if you need information about Mario or mlp just text me in chat I'll be willing to help
8088457 Ok. I'll keep that in mind.
He, don't worry. It's only been two months. Last time it was three, so you were actually quicker this time.
It's nice to see there is still some focus on what's happening in the Mushroom Kingdom. Though I like to point out that there is nothing that says that Peach and Daisy are sisters. They are stated as friends and Daisy is the Princess of another kingdom. Though I guess it won't hurt anything to go with this angle.
Anyway, that fight between Luigi and Dash was awesome. Then again Luigi has some pretty broken moves in Smash Bros. And to answer your question, my strongest character in Smash is Pikachu.
Mistakes found:
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on ("in" would applied he swallowed it.)
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The lavender girl then turned to Sunset.
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8196252 I keep trying to figure out that if Peach and Daisy are sisters. They say they are, some say they aren't but thought they would be like sisters. Also, I'll be putting some SSB references(BRAWL Mostly, before the WII U). Anyway, thanks for helping with grammar mistakes. Now to re-edit and plan the other chaptet.
Strongest Character in Smash: DK
8198062 I'll consider putting DK in the future.
I hate to be that guy but do the humane 6 live on their own? Because that's a little bit hard to swallow
Also on another note my best character is Toon Link
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No no your comment is okay. Well to be honest, I don't know cause sometimes I read other EQ stories and I assume that they live by themselves with the exception of Applejack. But I think you may be right. Just trying refigure out the girls' parents' names (Except Twilight cause I'm using the pony version and Sunset.) and I don't know what kind of houses does the girls live (I only saw PP's bedroom and kitchen. I only saw Rarity's boutique.) But I'll add them in a later time.
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Cool to know man
And so far I think we already know everyone's parents in the mlp universe so no reason to not use them well except for AJ's and since Fluttershy's parents were as kind as her I think they'll be expecting of Luigi
And I am not expecting the parents to be on every chapter just when it's you know natural like right now Fluttershy's parents could be at work where? I am not sure honestly I never got what their jobs were in the show but hey can'take wait to read more good luck
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How about Mrs. Shy is a flourist and Mr. Shy works in a factory? And I'll might consider putting Zephir Breeze in it.(let me know if I mispelled his name.)