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This looks interesting...
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I think it will be. It was certainly fun to write!
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That's what counts.
And I gave this a thumbs up, why isn't the bar green?
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Because it still has less than 10 total votes. The up/down doesn't show up for anybody except the author until that point.
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Ah
Interesting. Can't but notice the lack of a romance tag, so only physical shall it be? I wonder how will this change the Nightmare, though.
Anyway, following it
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Hmm. Honestly, the "romance" thing is debatable. What exactly constitutes a romance? It's not without character development, so I think that "only physical" is inaccurate, but it's not going to be Romeo and Juliet either.
At this rate it'll be Chryssie in control. Power bottom much?
Nightmare Moon and Chrysalis, great!!!!
Lots of mare cocks.... not so great anymore.....
Number of words per chapters... well it has lots of mare cocks...
I have a feeling I'm going to be changing my sheets tonight. I'm ready.
This is getting very guud
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Hmm good point. A romance tag is really only appropriate when the story has romantic tones. It can be a story where characters grow closer to each other without it being a focus.
Only one more? Shame
I was really expecting Nightmare to stop just short of getting Chryssy off, to try to turn the tables. That seems like the type of torture that would appeal to her.
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Hah! Yeah, I could see that. In some ways it'd make a lot more sense. But I personally am not hugely into denial stories, it's really unusual for me to write one.
I dare say Cadance is a conspiring clever clogs.
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Love finds a way, no matter what words you dress it up in.
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Heh, I'm not usually into that either, but the thought of Nightmare doing that night after night, telling Chryssy that she knows what she does right after she's left alone in her cell, wanting for more... that would be perfect. Not that what is written isn't excellent, of course.
Oh Caddy you sly old dog. This was brilliant.
I can't but notice it's marked incomplete, though. An epilogue coming? Or will you develop it further?
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No, I just uploaded it while up in the middle of the night and forgot to change the tag. Oops!
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Aww
You should make an epilogue or something. Show us the ultimate consequences of the pink alicorn's plan.
This was all Cadance's clever, time-traveling ploy to win at crack-shipping Bingo, wasn't it.
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Gasp! How did you know?
Sequin Pl0x
Very impressive. You are great with the characters.
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Thank you!
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I'm going to read the rest of your works. If this is you on "just having fun" mode then the rest must be really impressive.
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It's a mixed bag, some of them are better than others.
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So you're a humble person. More good signs.
The bit at the end with best pink princess is such an amazing little twist. There's so much possibility there
Interesting start... I can see these two working well together, they're one of my favourite pairings after all.
Like a fiddle.
Snrk, Nightmare, don't try playing mind games with a changeling Queen, that never ends well.
Kinky.
At least Chryssie's getting something out of it.
Nice.
Hahah, no one can resist the allure of best bughorse fur long!
*looks at Cadance* Clever girl...
Cadence, you amazing foolish girl
Most people forgot that poser was there
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sea bunny!!!!!!!!!!!!! - afmou
cmon bruh
Love your characterization work that keeps developing throughout the scene. Also, hot.
And that was brilliance.
Hah! That was highly enjoyable. And what a wonderful twist at the end.
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Thank you!
Can you make u sequel?
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Sorry, that's probably not going to happen.
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Can you at least make another Nightmare Moon X Chrysalis story? They're kinda hard to find.
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Alas, I'm not really writing pony these days, other than the occasional bit for Patrons. My current main fandom is Hades.
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You could still try, maybe a non-futa version but with strap-on dildos instead?
OK,
I reached a dry spell in my FIM reading. Nothing new looked interesting, and I ran out of older material that I haven't listened to yet. So I spent the last few days dredging up stuff I really don't normally listen to. And I came across this absolute gem.
This really unique. So many Authors copy paste each other. Same plot, different clothing. This isn't. Not only is it a different spin, but its kind of unique in how things play out. Its also not a Wham-Bam-Thank you-Mam, porn with bad acting and no plot. This is story driven, and by a solid story.
Well done, and the proof of that, is in the fact that I want to see what happens next. Only good writing can cause this effect on the readers.
10 out of 10
The Monk
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