Soarin gets the chance to show what he is made of as a leader of the wonderbolts. But might there be a certain rainbow tailed pony within the Wonderbolts that is taking her eye of the ball a little? Or rather, on him?
A 30 so year old guy from Sweden. Been a fan of cartoons all my life and a brony since the middle of season 6 /)
Soarin gets the chance to show what he is made of as a leader of the wonderbolts. But might there be a certain rainbow tailed pony within the Wonderbolts that is taking her eye of the ball a little? Or rather, on him?
As a fellow foreigner (non native English speaker) on the site I implore you to contact with an editor. Your grammar is simply terrible. They don't have to be super-ultra thorough but you really should have this fic looked at by some natives.
Um... yes Pipsqueak it's so "friendly" their relationship...
Why was the end so funny? Also, I want more, simply because I wanted Soarin to complete the task he was given AND have the sweet moments with Rainbow Dash. Pleaaaase. I want it to continue. What about the "tragedy"? What about the "sex" tag? Pleaaase.