Awkwardness tends to happen. Especially if you keep running into somepony you don't know well. Especially if that somepony is the mare who controls the moon.
Written for the Lunbra group's writing contest.
Previously fluffysam1212. Updated to match other socials because I tend to come back on to reread things. Will I ever fully come back? Who knows. Certainly not me. they/them/xey/xem/it/its
Awkwardness tends to happen. Especially if you keep running into somepony you don't know well. Especially if that somepony is the mare who controls the moon.
Written for the Lunbra group's writing contest.
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You did an amazing job with this. I'm proud of you Lauren >:]
The whaaaat?
Also, I really like the voice you give Sombra in all your stories. Longer stories from you would be very nice! :D
Very cute!
Rating: 🍆🍆🍆🥒
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Longer stories aren't really me forte
Like in my head this story was the Beast
However, I'm glad you actually like my Sombra :D
Man, If he is not, a king, or a warrior, or really powerfull in the arts of darkness, and atlest a Little bit Evil, he ia not Sombra... He is just a OC...
Nice fic, but not really sombra...
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This story is clearly marked an AU, and thus Sombra does not really need to be any of those things
But seriously, how is sneaking into a castle not a little bit evil
This was neat! You gave Sombra an interesting voice and and a different personality than I've ever read him with. I enjoyed how light hearted it was even if there were moments of tension.
Ding ding ding! Congratulations, your story is the first one I've read as a judge of the Lunabra contest! If all the other stories are as sweet as this one, I'm in for a fun time of reading. If I were to have a single complaint, it would be the slight lack of context for how the story itself operates, as you have the little thingy at the end about the specifics of the AU. I suggest putting that at the beginning, that way the reader fully understands the context. What i will say, however, is that your writing alone gave me enough information to piece together much of what your AU is like, which is a big plus. Other than that, I felt the dialogue was organic, and I thought their interactions were sweet. Actually, I do have another complaint; it's too short! I wanted to read more of them talking and eating together! Hardly a complaint, though, lol
Anywho, I'm off to read the other submissions, and I wish you luck.
Lunbra forever!