Takes place after the events of Duel: Twilight vs Twilight and Sonata's Big Duel.
The Rainbooms are heading off to Camp Everfree again only something seems wrong. Demolition equipment seems to be everywhere, Timber and his sister are out of commission, and their smartphones are down! Who has done this to their favorite campground? Well it's up to Twilight and Sunset to tag team duel those in change with the winner getting to determine the fate of the camp! If they survive the duel that is.
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This is gonna be so awesome. I'm also interested to see what sort of decks Cinch and Well-to-do use.
Looking good so far!
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I'm thinking Cinch will do Fabled or Darklord as a kind of fallen from grace thing
nicely done so far; also:
De Nile is a river in Africa
wow, I'd hate to be Adagio right now: realizing that the "blunderhead" is more capable then she thought and/or that she doesn't have as much power over Sonata as she thought; in any case, nice touch showing us the aftermath of the previous adventure
Well good fuel. I really like the personality you gave the Genex monsters
Cinch with a Monarch/Wicked God deck and an industrialist (Well-To-Do) with a Railway deck; ...yeah, I can see this happening; also:
well, THIS can only end so many ways; I mean...wait a minute: what was that last bit?
so let me get this straight: on top of all of Well-To-Do's OTHER crimes, he's bullied his workers into not even acknowledging their own existence outside of numbers?
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...I'm going to start beating the stuffing out of something/someone: I'm not sure when I'll stop 😠
Badass! Great duel!
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Its A DBZ abridged joke.
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ah, touche
I saw those TFS references nicely done.
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Thanks
Cinch has partnered with the Dazzlings, this bodes very poorly.
nicely done; also:
huh: seems Aria is getting a bit frustrated that Adagio wants to be in control of the situation but refuses to adapt; ...is it weird I can sort of see her joining Sonata in supporting the Rainbooms?
Nicely done and good build up to a sequel
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Seems odder that Adagio is having such a hard time adapting since they would of had to have done so over the centuries. Maybe its because they always had their magic as a constant. Without it, Adagio feels more lost and is getting angrier.
As for Aria she may just try to head out on her own if Adagio keeps acting like this. Not supporting the Rainbooms but not supporting her sister either.
I thought that the big guy that Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash encountered was strange, but I didn't know he was THE 16 (or your version of him at least). That was a nice surprise and the girls have a new friend! Plus, the additional mention of 17 (aka Lapis) was funny because "I'm gonna range the shit outta that park".
Now we have setup for the next fic. Sunset's going to upgrade her deck and Cinch decides to team up with Adagio. You know, I think that Sunset or Fluttershy could use a copy of Stardust Dragon in their deck because it's an awesome card with a great effect.
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Got the idea from the brony analysis group when they watched Camp Everfree. There was this great bit where they replaced bits of Fluttershys dialogue with 16s.
Great story!
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eh, fair enough
Nice little nod to the dub gx theme
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i figure it is her lol like who else would it be
I feel bad that it took me this long to finally read the story. This was an awesome read and I'm happy to see Sonata is doing well for herself.
Impressive and I look forward to the new duels! I wonder if you’ll be interested in a Nekroz user OC?
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Thanks and I might be using them in the future. Be sure to check out Dueling for a Chance
ok i completely forgot about the train deck reminds me of a certain Montenegro
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I sort of wish the Infinitracks had come out sooner. Might have worked just as well. Oh well. Hope you are enjoying the current story
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Truthfully infinitracks work much better for the character. And granted the trains archetype only became popular because of rata. And now we have three new archetypes with one based off Kobayashi's dragon maid.
I'll stick with my melodious but I'm curious about what these new cards would do
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I think trains were popular ever before Rata.
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Trains were niche and a very one dimensional deck (before the new support) a lot of people didn't even know it was a deck before rata showed up
Couldn't Sunset have used Red Nova's ability to stop Wicked Avatar's attack?
What about Spike though?
Like seriously, Sci-Twi? He' literally with you girls and yet he's not acknowledged since he's just a pet dog?
That was a pretty good duel to read and such.