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Nice! I can relate to that, i was also born too Early. Two months to be exact.
An incredibly touching and heartfelt piece. Though part of me can't help but imagine the parents arrivig in the Empire and an extremely worn-out Shining saying "Well, Mom. The good news is she wasn't early. The bad news is she almost killed the rest of us."
Even so, wonderful stuff. Thank you for it.
This brought me to tears. When my sister had my nephew he had some health troubles. Nothing severe, but it made us worry so much.
Very comforting. But I don't get why you put the death tag.
I can attest to problems with premature births in my family. I was delivered without any problems, and so was my second little brother. My first one though, he had trouble breathing and was blue in the face when he came out. He had a heart condition that couldn't be cured, only treated. He pulled through pretty well though.
It's always a scary thing when a premature delivery results in complications, to either the mother or the child.
An idea was percolating though my head as I read this story, and thinking of my headcanon of Shiny the idea of him on life support seemed a bit ironic... but I could make to work. The quote above is just to show how far I got before it fully crystalized.
Anyway:
"Shining wasn't born premature, he graduated from womb early and God sent him to spend the time saved in an intensive survival-training program to increase his toughness for the missions before him."... yeah, about as true as "Chuck Norris facts", but I like it. I was probably inspired by "Toph isn't blind, she just can't see anything less awesome than she is." or however that goes in the Avatar: The Last Airbender fandom.
Yes, this has very little to do with this story.
Boy, are Y'ALL in for a surprise...
Heh... he might need... whatever the Equine equivalent of a gauntlet* is in her case... Cadance is a BIG girl (if slender), and has an Earth Ponies strength.
*Could web-search it... don't want to.
This is a very good line.
I have tears in my eyes from some earlier stuff, but this particular part is good, but could be better. I think you may be falling too much into a human mindset. Gloves are a thing, so are bare hooves when possible. But perhaps even before gloves their should have been telekinesis.
Sometimes emotional scars have physical scar-tissue...
But at least she has them in the attic (at least by now) rather than in her bedside table or something.