Though there were a few bumps along the way, Starlight Glimmer now stands as the new Head Mare of Princess Twilight's School of Friendship. Today is her first day in the role, and to mark the event, she's decided to take the first class with the students. But there is one question. What to teach them?
An excellent story with a nicely-delivered lesson.
They do say experience is the best teacher.
Great job on this one-shot peak onto Starlight's first day as Head-Mare of the Friendship School. The exchanges, characterizations and general wrap-up were quite well done in all the right places. I particularly liked the point out that mistakes can be useful as learning tools as long as you are careful, which actually IS a pretty good lesson to teach.
I'm definitely going to be looking forward to your remaining one-shots for the year (as well as more of your work in general next year).
And Happy Holidays in advance.
Very insightful & deep, now that was quite a lesson Starlight has learned.
Happy Holidays James!
A perfect way for Starlight to begin her role as teacher and Head-Mare of the Friendship School. Well done!
Such a story like this just popped in my eyes as interesting! So why the heck not read it?! My gosh, I don't regret reading this one bit! So since that was the case, I made a little audio adapter for it! Hope ya didn't mind! Great plot, the lesson was something the readers can learn and implement into their own lives, it was just pure bliss!
Audio Link: https://youtu.be/E2qxCgotUWY
(I don't mean for this comment to be offensive!)
"Anyone can make an error, but that error doesn't become a mistake until you refuse to correct it."
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A wonderful lesson. One that everyone should learn. Great job with the delivery, too.
It's as Miss Frizzle always says: "Take chances, make mistakes, and get messy!"
I totally love this! <3 Would you let me record an fanfic reading with your story? All credits given to you, of course:3
Fitting lesson for Starlight to teach
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Nice reading!
Starlight is a pony with strong words, and that's so fitting to her character!