Reformation for a bug

Chrysalis is released from her stone prison to be put under hoves of Starlight Glimmer for reformation. She is not particularly happy with it.

It begins several weeks after season nine finale.

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Chapter 1 · 22nd Nov 2019 · 2,830 words
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Chapter 2 · 12th Dec 2019 · 1,824 words
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Chapter 3 · 20th Dec 2019 · 1,525 words
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FelSpite

FelSpite #1 · Nov 26th, 2019 · 3 · 11 · Chapter 1 ·

I’m just so tired of this endless trail of Chrysalis reformation fics...

MayhemMoth

MayhemMoth #2 · Dec 3rd, 2019 · 2 · · Chapter 1 ·

Heck yeah more Starlight reforming villain fics.

Looks interesting so far, but there are a lot of Grammar errors. I've seen a few recurring instances where quotation marks have commas/periods on the end or are completely missing, and a few misused words, among other things. A few too many to list and point out all at once, but something a good proofreading or two could possibly fix.

But it's your first story, so I'm not judging, just something to look out for in the future!

secury

secury #3 · Dec 12th, 2019 · · · Chapter 2 ·

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Thanks for the comment. I am very well every that I am seriously lacking Grammar control in my writing skills. I am hoping that is something I will get better with more practice. I will try a better job at checking quotation marks for now.

I am glad that you find it at least interesting. I guess that counts for something.

Quinch

Quinch #4 · Dec 14th, 2019 · · · Chapter 1 ·

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It's the FotM, plus pretty fertile ground.

As for the story itself, I'll have to say that it's hurting pretty badly for a proofread and grammar pass, but other than that, it's a fun read. Most of the reform fics tend to feature Twilight, and Starlight's sass and not-taking-your-crap attitude is a reliable source of amusement.

secury

secury #5 · Dec 14th, 2019 · · · Chapter 2 ·

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Yeah, I suck at grammar checking. If I fail again about it in chapter 3 then I guess I will ask someone for proofreading.

Otherwise, I like that you find it funny. I pick Starlight as the main character precisely because of her not-taking-your-crap attitude. I just hope I am getting her right.

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