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This story is a sequel to Episode 223 (S9 E27): Matters of the Heart
After Twilight and Starlight become co-headmares of the School of Friendship, Sunburst discovers that his services will no longer be necessary. This disappoints him greatly as his hopes of working at a school were dashed.
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Well I’d say he overreacted and whatever he’s planning on doing will just end badly for him.
I think if you wanted Sunburst to become evil you should’ve had him see Twilight and Starlight making out.
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I've decided to do a season 10, one that will be darker than anything the show would throw at us.
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I wanted them to remain professional and you know why I put Silverstream as their assistant? I did that so she can keep anyone from going back there when they're making out!
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Yeah! I mean, becoming a "Bad Guy" of all things??!! Seriously?! I know that both Starlight and Tempest got some silly and ridiculous reasons to be bad guys. But, Sunburst become bad because he DOESN'T get a job at the Friendship School?!
I mean, he's trying to getting a position that has Mare in it. NOT, Stallion/Man/Guy! I think this is a RGRE or they have something against Males.
Because, Most of the School's Positions are mostly Mares/Females. While the Guys like Gallus and Sandbar are the "assistants". And I know Discord will be the emergency school master. But, considering his Bad History of screwing stuff up.
Not to mention with what happened of teaming up with Tirek in Season 4 Finale. And most recently the Season 9 fiasco! I doubt it was a good idea, Twilight!
I just think that Sunburst instead should go on strike for Stallion Equally! Than this typical Villain Business. 😒
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I have to agree. This kinda feels super forced I would say. This guy already is known as one of the greatest unicorns around but he would go evil because he didn't get a job? That doesn't really seem to fit his character. I do kinda like the idea of this bringing in some of the MAJOR issues in Equestria instead of having some dude just become a token bad guy.... from not getting a job. Having the very clear divide in the sexes with them coming into play would make alot of interesting events and interactions. It could also bring up the fact that it seems that ALL the major positions in the government, education, and well EVERYTHING is ran by unicorns or those that use to be unicorns. There is some racism and classism in their culture I think really need to be called into question more than just some guy being pissy because he didn't get to be someone's assistant
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Well when I start my season ten, I am going to throw more of a fantasy element into things than going with a "Equestria is sexist" thing. I have ideas regarding how a fantasy world and darkness can merge to create a supervillain, one that would put the problems Equestria has had to face throughout the series to shame.
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HOW will a "Bad Guy" Version of Sunburst be any "worse" than the past Villains or Enemies? Is it because that he knows the Main Six, Spike, Starlight, Trixie, Young Six, Celestia/Luna, and the other Equestria's Heroes personally?! So, he can hurt them more personal than the other Baddies?! Or that he is a very Smart Unicron? And he can make some more successful plans against the Heroes or something? Is that it?!
Although, his "reasoning" to be a Villain is still highly stupid than Starlight's or Tempest's reasoning to be Bad Guys!
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This is where I'm going to throw in aspects of darker fantasy. What he will do is travel to a place that was used for dark magic in the past and allow himself to absorb the darkness and his intelligence will come into play. Yes he doesn't have a lot of magical talent right now, doing this will give him large amounts of talent and then he can do what he plans. Think of Sauron, that is the darkness level I plan on throwing into him. He will go through such a radical change that he won't even be the same name and will even adopt a new name.
This is going to be a whole lot more than what happened involving Starlight and Tempest, Sunburst will willingly corrupt himself....and I am even thinking of having a dark land rise from the depths, a place that Sunburst will be drawn to. Long story short: This won't be your standard My Little Pony villain scenario.
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So, becoming Sauron himself!!!!!???
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Over NOT having a Job in a rather cheesy School Of Friendship?! And probably didn't like that Starlight loves Twilight and not him?! Okay, I think that IF when they face the new dark and evil Sunburst. That Pinkie Pie or even Discord criticize him that his "reasoning" is rather stupid than even what Luna/Nightmare Moon's, Starlight Glimmer's, Sunset's, Stygain/Shadow Pony's Tempest Shadow's, EVERY SINGLE Equestria Girls Special "Villains", or even Cozy Glow's reasons to be the bad guys!
That will be a hilarious fourth wall break right their. 😂 😅 😆
What's next? He will somehow get Sauron's Army as well?
https://lotr.fandom.com/wiki/Sauron%27s_army
And will your stories of Season 10 be Rated Teen or even Related Mature for now on?
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Oh he will find an artifact to build an army similar to Sauron's army of orcs, let's just say that he will find something that belonged to one of the baddies I grew up with. Now my season 10 will have normal episodes in it too but the story itself will have to be rated teen because I doubt what I have planned will keep it rated E.
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But, will Pinkie Pie or Discord make that joke of his ridiculous reasoning to be a Bad Guy. Because, he is clearly taking it TOO FAR!!!!
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Yeah, Discord will because if he wanted to, he could create something with a snap of his fingers that would be much worse.
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Well I altered the ending of this because I have different plans for the future....and regarding season 10, I am going to do it more like how the show does it. I will write the whole thing before beginning to release "episodes" on a weekly basis. After all, trying to get one episode done within a week of releasing the last one would likely put too much stress on me.
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I honestly like this more to be fair. It still leaves room for him to be a villain down the road easily but doesn't make him seem cartoonishly evil for something so small. I would tho like to see Starlight reflect on her relationship with her oldest friend. That is something I found to be super strange is that we didn't get Twilight or Starlight reaction to him like a person. It felt so cold and uncaring how they treated him. Starlight more so in this because he is suppose to be someone she is super close with but when she saw him clearly hurting she didn't comment like a friend should. This could be something she regrets throughout the series or even just something you dismiss with a throw away line next chapter it was just something i was thinking of as I re-read it.
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Well, thanks. This is a lot better.
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Agreed!
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Well at this point she has two things running across her mind, her job and Twilight. This is something that will carry over and Sunburst will return in season 10. I did figure that this would be a better plan so that I wouldn't be tied down by giving Sunburst a specific role in the future. Research will be there but him turning evil isn't something I have to throw in there. I have other plans for the evil that will arise, something that will return from the most ancient times.