Starlight used to collect scrolls. Old scrolls. Scrolls that taught you magic. When her father has her old stuff delivered to Twilight's castle, she discovers a particular scroll. One that transports you to a different dimension.
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Starlight used to collect scrolls. Old scrolls. Scrolls that taught you magic. When her father has her old stuff delivered to Twilight's castle, she discovers a particular scroll. One that transports you to a different dimension.
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I miss Lee. Best character from that series.
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Yeah, he was a good dude
Does that mean this story will never be complete?
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Idk, I'll end it whenever I feel like it but I ain't gonna end it early that's for sure
I can't wait to see you where
you take the adventure
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Yeah me too, hopefully this fic will turn out swell
Oh dang
I wonder about the food situation
Next chapter! Please!
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Yeah I'll try to upload as frequent as i can dude
I foresee alot of death
The zombies of The Walking Dead are mindless, right?
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Yeah, I'm sure it's not just walking dead either
Please update
Survival chance increase for fluttershy, learning a harsh terrible lesson.
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Yup, maybe now it'll be easier hunting for her to hunt animals...
lolwut? One of the flower ponies is called Lily, how is this name an odd one for her?
She has seen one city destroyed by monsters she knows next to nothing about and assumes any percentage of a world she knows very little about may have been destroyed? That's a crazy assumption.
This fic is gonna be really painful to read if Trixie keeps on being the only one with above room temperature IQ, so even tho I like her I hope she dies soon. Oh and Pinkie Pie too, their rationality is hurting the ambient stupidity that this fic needs to progress the plot.
Twilight is being a total idiot and a mean bitch to boot here. Not only do they not have their magic, they don't even have their pony bodies, just weak human ones. I don't understand what she even pretends they do to help that the humans here can't do. Are they gonna sing and blast their friendship rainbow laser to save world or something?
If she really wants to help this world she could just go to Equestria and get back with proper help, instead of forcing her friends into doing something they don't want as well as risking their lives. I don't know why she's crazily assuming that the scroll-spell is not gonna land them in the same world again.
It's fucking wild that Trixie's rational assumptions about dangers are ignored and waved away when they become true but Twilight's crazy assumptions are followed even tho they never take place.
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Alright, just read your critique. I'll start off with saying, I don't take fanfiction too seriously otherwise it's just gonna get boring and it'll turn into just another job. Not saying that you're criticism isn't valid, just an explanation as to why characters, plot or story may be extremely dumb at times.
Cool chapter!
please update
So good
Nice👍 looking forward to the next chapter.
I kind of wish there was romance and story
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That gets me worried. Is there really no plot in this story? Not even in a “threat of the day” sense?
I think I may have figured out how they're supposed to get back they're supposed to celebrate a person's birthday while also singing the song.
Somebody's actually thinking smartly.
Sometimes it's better if you just listen to your friend's opinion and get the f out of there.
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Yeah... terrible lack of judgment for Twilight xD
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Well, that is SUCH A HORRIBLE METHOD OF TRAVELING BACK.
If you miss a person's birthday or a whole group of people's birthdays, then they will have to wait for an entire year!!!
Oh boy, here comes the most ANNOYING and HATEFUL character.
Twilight I'm sorry but........this isn't something friendship can solve......
You can't fix this. Just leave us to fend for ourselves or to die trying.
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Well...........thats not good.
........................... (face slam)
There was no magic in the EQG human world, so why would this world be any different?
Just give her the gun. Its for the best
She'll rest in peace instead of suffering as a walker.
Honestly, I would do the same thing....
Its for the best.....
Sonetimes the hardest decisions, are the best kindness.
You don't understand Starlight!! She was bitten and sick, which meant she was going to turn!
If she didn't kill herself, then she'll come back and continue suffering as a walker! You saying its better to turn instead of dying in peace?
Just what would you choose if you were in that situation!?
A cure? ARE YOU SERIOUS!!!? Just how long do you think that will take. How long do you think that woman had!!?
Twilight, you are smarter than this!!
This is exactly how I would imagine myself if I was there, trying crack open their brains.
"This is of life and death!!"
"The world isn't always sunshines and rainbows!"
"You all are about friendship and harmony, but those mean nothing in the apocolypse! If you don't start taking things seriously, then you will only get yourself killed!!"
"You all need to start coming out of your fantasy world and start facing reality!!!"
...................... Trixie you.....
https://youtu.be/YQk9YnJjSv4?si=hbkSvvKoakqYmyxA
Yeah......
If you just one day see walking corpses everywhere, a thing that we all believed as legends. Then this shouldn't really be a surprise and weird.
Welp......
Thats Fluttershy gone.
Done with Mark? What do you mean by that?
What happened to Mark?
(sigh) She brought it on herself....
Uh oh....
...........😨😨😨😨😨😨😨
Rainbow.......wha
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Holy mother to god bro, u lit up my notifications xD ! Appreciate u readn, bro!
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So.....will this continue?