Sky went to a convention as a grapple Pilot, he was not expecting to be thrust into a conflict between Equestria and the Griffon Empire. Is this it or is there something bigger afoot with the war as only the beginning?
Editor: Alchemik (https://www.fimfiction.net/user/259701/Alchemik)
That's a good start for the first chapter can't wait for the next one
This is really good, can't wait for the next one.
Good choice on the Spitfire LMG. I’m partial to the X-55 Devotion myself.
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Devoted to the devotion i see
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Last I checked I got my devotion up to regeneration 4.
the paragraphs are way too blocky for me, and the main character seems overly nonchalant. Try breaking things up more in the future please, it makes thing easier to read.
I read a lot of HFY and Humans Are Space Orks. It would amuse me greatly if Deaths life become hell, weather or not the OC agrees to help.
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I don't know how I would even start going about doing that