Twilight Sparkle and Applejack end up getting pulled through a strange rift just outside of their farm homes into worlds with ponies sporting wings or a horn. As they try to find a way back, they end up encountering ponies with very friendly demeanors that want to help the lost mares.
But, why did rifts open up in the first place? Why are they warping light and color around them, and why is there a strained voice coming from them? Is Twilight and Applejack's world threatened? What about these new ones? What is about to happen?
Based off the original prompts for G5 where the Mane 6 were still going to be the main characters, but the tribes were split into their own worlds. I've tweaked everything to be more varied and to get rid of any 'planet-of-hats' tropes.
If this is a successful concept, I'll continue it and try my best to make 'episodic' chapters with continuity to an extent, like the cartoon.
I could've cropped the image, but it would've sliced off the artist's name, and THAT'S, NO GOOD
Nice!
Soooo....
Next year maybe?
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Oh right. The timing. Nah. I was working on my Helluva Boss fanfic and started working as a...dishwasher...So I had no energy and wanted to finish the experiment over on DA. The last chapter shouldn't take too long provided no bs comes into play.
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Well then I will be waiting!
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I put the link for the fic in a blog post if you want to read it. Up to you.
After I finish this I'll move to continuing the Left Behind Sunny Disposition fanfic. It's about time I finished that.
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which one? you have a lot of them....
I need to finish my too, so I feel you
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The most recent.
Here
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ok thanks!
Did... 1 year I think? Maybe 2? I remember reading a One Shot which had the same description and cover, and it was about that, Twilight creates some wooden wings, flies and... It ended at the edge of your world? He was with pegasos? I don’t remember, but thanks to that this story interested me much more
Is the mystery pony Celestia?
Is this a RE-WRITE cause i swear this story look familiar but stie says i have read any chapters yet
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Odd. Maybe people have also been inspired by the cover.
I just want to implement the original idea I liked so much and use mythology that isn't JUST GREEK AND NORSE.
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Yes and no.
Not sure about everyone else, but the deja vu might be coming from this story: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/514061/when-ponies-fly
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YES I knew it was familiar just couldn't remember story name
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So far at 2k words. Might end up more chonk than I was expecting
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the more the better!
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IS out. Gonna do one more chap.
I wonder how Spike would fit into the original Gen 5 prompt?
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Been thinking about it and I got a good (to me) idea for that. Just have to figure out which world it is that he comes from.
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Finished it
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Is he gonna be part of their bond too?
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Sure, but I'll need to figure out how to have him be part of the six without imitating the past FiM series and the current one where he's a child. Maybe a more receptive dragon while still being Spike.
Don't want that disgusting thing that sounds like it's drowning whenever it opens its mouth in current gen 5.
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You mean Sparky?
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If that's the name of the 'dragon' with the seventeen-head, then yes.
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I am kind of fine with Sparky but the fact they made hika literal newborn really effed him up
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I just don't like anything about him.
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They did dragons pretty dirty in Gen 5
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Yeah. Now they all look like the dragons from HTTYD kiddie version (The one where they talk).
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It feels like a devolution
they fucked up by changing the Gen 5 from this, WE COULD'VE HAD
VIKING THEMED EARTH PONIES.
as a Dane, you have no fucking idea how pissed and sad i got when i found out they scrapped that,
RESPECT OUR CULTURE DAMIT!
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Well, if you can get enough people to read this and tell me they would like regular chapters from this world, I could have the main Earth Pony group we see with Twilight and Applejack be nordic.
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pressing X to doubt on that would happen, :/ but that would nice if that was to happen, :)
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I left their main cultural inspiration unknown on purpose :>
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ohhh sneaky, aren't we? >:3
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maybe