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Interesting premise to see Chrysalis in the new gen and she's my favourite villain so looking forward to seeing this story, especially given you wrote To Ne'er Come Down Again which is an absolutely incredible Chrysalis story
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Not to suck myself off, but I To Ne'er my best work
Hopefully you like this little story
Let's not get crazy!
Did you have Chrysalis pull a General Zod (being imprisoned for her crimes in a way that happened to save her from something that wiped out the rest of her species), or is there some other explanation of how she survived without magic?
Oh, I'm so happy this is out!!!
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Well, remember that discord survived being trapped as a a statue for a thousand years.
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as a rule asuming that anything discord did in any way makes that thing posible is a bad idea...spirit of chaos and all that.
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My point is more that without magic all the changelings most likely starved... except Chrysalis, if she was a statue at the time. Sort of like how, when Krypton was destroyed, all their worst criminals (of which Zod is the most well-known) survived because they were imprisoned in the Phantom Zone.
an interesting start, but the question begins to torment me: "How did it happen that there was only one Chrysalis inside the statue? Where did the rest go?
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Perhaps they were removed for some reason...
>Insert dramatic DUN DUN DUUUUUUUN here
Chryssi is top tier always
This is a really cool idea. Chrysalis is playing Sprout at the moment, but because he has no clue who she is, he treats her like a creepy bug-pony that just so happens to be attractive and nice to him, so he shows her genuine compassion. Chrysalis, not being used to someone being compassionate to her (especially someone as “gifted” as Sprout), has no idea how to effectively take charge of the situation, especially when Sprout says and does things that catch her off guard.
It kinda reminds me of…
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She saw her son in bed with her doppelgänger, didn't she? Or has Chrysalis changed her disguise?
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At that current point, she's just a slightly thicker version of herself
This is a really fun pairing, and I'd love to see this continue. Also, seeing the Queen of the Changelings make her ass and hips bigger must've been one hell of an awakening for Sprout. Great stuff as usual.
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for Chrysalis, this option is even worse..
Phyllis must be running into the basement now to put on her Tony Stark armor to slay the demon that has captured her son.
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There will be repercussions...
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Plottwist: Phyllis is a Changeling as well !
As always, your stories where you put that extra bit of juice into the plot and character development are a delight. And of course Chrysalis is the best character so that didnt hurt either. Was a great read and looking forward to the next one
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chryssy is my favorite villain of the show
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something turns out that there were no special consequences. From "a rich lady who essentially runs a weapons company" who saw her son captured by some large and scary creature, you expect any consequences, not that Chrysalis will make peace with the whole city behind the scenes.
Aside from the explicit content (which isn't for me, and is thankfully easy enough to skip while still knowing what's going on), I thoroughly enjoyed this story. For me, the highlights are Chrysalis' inner conflict about the sort of person she should become and the interactions she has with the ponies of the future. I especially liked the part where she imparts her biases onto poor Sunny as historical fact; In this instance, it appears history is written by the loser.
Neither was Cadence, if you consider the backstory in the "Twilight Sparkle and the Crystal Heart Spell" Chapter Book being any sort of canon .
[long story short, she was a pegasus adopted by Earth Ponies who stopped a sorceress from draining the nearby ponies' love. Celestia recognized her deed, made her a princess, ascended her into an alicorn, and adopted her as her niece.]
A part 2 would be great or a bonus chapter. Please Please please please
You made me happy with this, not only because it was super hot, but because Chryssie gets a dubiously good ending after having 420 every day for ages. (I'm not sure if it's mentioned how long has passed in the new Equestria since The reign of Twiggles.)
This was awesome!
Great story, with a great ending. I wish there was more but this is also a good place to stop it.
Thanks for writing this out!
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My pleasure!
This is awesome!
Well, well... It looks like Chrysalis got her happy ending in more ways than one. And multiple times too.
That's it, Sprout! Keep her flat-hooved!
Wonder when Chrysalis will resume ovulating?
Hehe. Cute!
So I'm finally getting around to reading this and I hate to be that guy but few things to go over
you might want to remove "the only thing"
Not exactly an error but in this chapter you jump between using her and it a lot
crimson coat
given you're talking about her concern for how much time has passed, a singular concern, you probably wanted to put "by a vastly more unnerving concern"
feels a bit redundant to use upper twice
Sorry if I'm stepping on your toes here XD
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I’d say it’s more his pleasure
Honestly, a pretty good story