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A cute little story,
I am very pleased with how you presented Marble here. She's in love with Spike but she's not over possessive of him. When she found out he was in love with somepony else, it hurt her but she accepted it, which is very mature of her. Marble really cares about Spike's well being and if that means letting him go she will do that.
This act of maturity proves she deserved the happy ending.
A little nitpick:
I think you mean 'her sisters Maud and Limestone Pie'.
This was a cute story. Not that many fics that show Marble being paired with Spike.
Come to think of it I wish there was an episode where the Mane Six and Spike visited the rock farm (and I mean the other girls and Spike, we know Applejack visted.)
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I am pleased that my writing satisfied! Also thank you for pointing out that error!
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I know right? There aren’t many stories with Marble x Spike and since I was in the mood for some romance, I decided; why not? Yeah, I would have loved to see an episode like that.
There need to be more of this ship!!
Welp, Faust said this is cannon now, so...
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I wholeheartedly agree!
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I hope you do more
Cute!
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Thank You!
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Pretty good!
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Thanks!
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