The Canterlot Wedding has placed stress upon everyone, especially Twilight and Princess Cadance. After Twilight's outburst and removal from the wedding planning, she disappeared. Many thought, including her friends, thought that she just needed space. But Luna, supported by a stranger, launches a search party beneath Canterlot. However, what she may find will haunt her forever.
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Okay. Literally nothing outside of what happened to Twilight and Cadance, makes sense. Random human for literally no reason for one.
Most HIE at least explain how and WTF he was babbling about. Did I miss a prequel?
Dude, she had it coming.
So where the heck are Twilight's friends? Or brother and parents?
Don't they realize what literally happened to poor Twilight and Cadence?
Even If they somehow turn back to normal by some crazy Deus Ex Machina.
I will highly prophesize and bet that Twilight will MOST DEFINITELY will never want to see her former friends, Shining, her own parents, and including Celestia ever again.
Because not only she has freaking defiled, and turn into a Changeling against her will ( Including her real sister-in-law. ).
Her very "speical" friends, her own brother, her own parents, and Celestia DIDN'T get a total crap where she was, or find out if she was okay.
Until it was bloody late and pointed out to them by a third party.
Luna, along with that random human protagonist are the real heroes here.
Her only real friends she has now. Is that Knight-Regent guy that save everybody/everypony, the real Cadence, possibly Spike, and Luna that actually does give a s**t on where Twilight and Cadence was.
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Thank you for your comment. I while ago I found myself in the…more heretical side of Fimfiction. In it, a found a story which features the defilement of Twilight that I showed here. So technically, yes you could call that a “Prequal“.
Spoilers for later works that I want to do- My belief, at least when it comes to fiction, is that all fics could be part of a larger multiverse. There are things, both pony, human, and other, that can travel between each universe. The Regent is one of those. I actually have most of his story planned out, which would feature across multiple universes(fics) and a timespan of some 10,000 years. There are lot things that I showed in this short story that would be relevant later on.
Anyway, thank you for the comment and view. May Harmony Prevail.
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I guess that makes... kinda sense. Though all of my stories are their own multiverse. People can write for it, but there are certain, not up for debate rules they abide by
Spoiling all that to be safe.
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That’s completely fair. The Analogy I ended coming up with was “Imagine a valley. In it, there are a bunch of tiny streams all running in the same direction. Each of those streams is it’s own universe, with the flow of water representing time. The Valley itself represent all alike universes(MLP has its own valley, Halo has its own, etc etc.) There are areas where different valley seem to touch, and streams combine. Those are crossovers. Some areas of The Valley are more distant from the rest of The Valley( your multiverse, if you will). The last part of the puzzle is the idea that there is an infinite amount streams in a valley, and there are an infinite amounts of Valleys.
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Thank you for your comment. Please bear in mind that the time between Twilights disappearance, Her Defilement, and the search party is only 12-18 hours at most. The main reason the search party goes out it due to the strangers( The Regent’s) intervention.
The Knight-Regent is a character I have been working on for a while. Initially , he started as one of those fix it characters-but he slowly developed into his own person. While this story was short, and I do not plan on writing a sequel, there are couple of things introduced in this story that are more relevant to the over arching story. Things like the Knight-Regent being enraged at Twilight’s defilement, more than Luna, is a hint towards his true identity. The Title The Knight-Regent is just that, a Title.
But yeah-thank you for the comment. Theirs a lot of stress going into planning a wedding, which part of the reason in canon Celestial never notices the deception.
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Still, regardless.
Even if there won't be a sequel for this story. I have a good feeling that Twilight will highly likely to never forgive her former friends, mentor, brother, and parents anytime soon. ( For not believing her, or caring about her and Cadence. )
Because what that bug queen bitch did to her, should be very traumatizing to Twilight.
And most of her loved ones didn't even give a crap about her, except with the likes of a literal stranger that is not from their world, or Luna.
Can we get a sequel to this?