Rarity’s newest batch of orders keeps her working until deep into the night, where she quickly finds out she’s not the only pony awake.
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I have mixed feelings about this story. I think the premise had a lot of potential, and the execution was pretty good at first, but the story just got a bit too fast and too explosive, ruining the nice vibe it had built up. On top of that, the prose was a bit clunky, and there were quite a few mechanical errors throughout. I think this could have been much better if it were a bit longer and had gotten a bit more proofreading.
It's interesting. at first I thought the mannequin stood no chance against rarity with her magic and all, but the tables turned so suddenly