It's true, you know. In space, no one can hear you scream like a little girl.
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Go on.
I am interested. Go on.
I like where this is going. Only one nitpick:
Should be "caused".
I can't see any other mistakes. Have a star and a thumb.
By all means, carry on.
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I'm so used to writing in present tense, I have to force myself to add "ed" onto words. Thanks for the catch!
Go on, good sir.
I wish to see more, especially after you finished your last story.
As always. I require more. Star and thumb and such. Love it so far.
Sounds interesting.
Either I'm confused or that six should be another three.
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Heh. It's pretty apparent that this chapter was a bit rushed. I had originally put down six for all of them, but I suppose I missed that once. Thanks for catching my mistake. Fixed.
PHIRZT!
Also, great stuff!
Nice. This has a lot of potential depending on where you go with it. I like the portrayal of Cadance as really quite powerful in her own right.
"The whistling sound of her inhalation reaches the Changeling’s ears."
Um, you did it again. With the tenses.
I like this type of story, with the villain in need. It gives the hero an opportunity to show virtues like compassion, mercy, and forgiveness. Also villain redemption is always nice.
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*sigh*
Thanks, mate. I never learn. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png
i like it it's so great and awesome
Why i feel that cat will be Opalescence?
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Opal has no love. If it is her, it's going to be really funny really quickly.
I love it.
Next chapter we get to see the bug queen eat kittens. This is gonna be great!
I wonder why SA didn't report this to Celestia immediately...
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Because it would kill the progression of the story. But a valid point, my friend.
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He doesn't wear the pants in the relationship.
*Whip sound*
Too fast maybe?
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Oh, but we're not done yet.
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WHY NOT.
Now I really need to see the next bit. C'mon, hurry up. Get to it, hup!
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Hey, man. Unlike you, I am not a fearless writing machine who cranks out quality on a daily basis. For me, we take time to appreciate the zen that is pony fiction. To sink into the collective consciousness of fan fiction writers to derive some inspiration and spew it forth onto a Google doc in some semblance of a story.
What the buck did I just write?
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I am not entirely certain, but it sounds like it may involve regular showers...
I'm loving everything about this chapter.
Except for the apostrophe in the very last sentence.
Ah don't like it.
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Something in my mind told me that whenever Changeling is plural, it must also be possessive. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png
Fixed
Do continue.
Truly excellent Fic, perhaps you could write more per chapter, but nonetheless your content and pacing is fine.
For Great Justice!
There aren't many occasions when I feel a whole lot of sympathy for Chrysy, but this is one of them.
Okay I had to reread the part about her tasting blood in her mouth. I thought it was saying she enjoyed the taste of her own blood at first. My bad for skimming a bit (force of habit). Good start
SIZTH!!!! Jk, of course Cadance helps. She's a nice pony and a good friend. Even if the one she's helping brainwashed her husband and almost killed her aunt. She's very nice, I wish she was my babysitter when I was little. Also lol on the cats seeing the auras too. Had me laughing for a good minute
OK I read it I laughed I loved it and liked it, please update!
(Joke) Alt. Title: Cadence Presents: The Most Likeliest Of Fanfics
Well, you know, it's a better title than Let's Scare The Crap Out Of The Spa Ponies.
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"she had never seen a formal ware model before"
I believe you meant 'formal wear'.
Still thoroughly enjoying this.
“I’m afraid that I am disinclined to acquiesce to your request.”
“What?”
“That means ‘no’.”
and thus...my day was made
Figures as soon as I find this story it's on hiatus.
6613049 I know, right, this is great. I hope it comes back soon.
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You and me too.
It would not surprise me in the least if the Elements and Princesses were all in on this little secret after a few days, mainly because Luna cornered Shining Armor as soon as he stepped into the castle, getting him to sing like a bird of what Cadance was doing. Naturally, they all agreed to let it continue because Equestria's greatest weapon is not the Rainbow blast to the face but pinning their enemy down to love and tolerate the hell out of them until they're
brainwashedI mean friends.1488372 It's sad that Shining Armor in both the original and bizzaro universe don't wear the pants in the family.
Cadence can be too nice for her own good. So much so that it makes me gag.
I just want to poke Cryssie and coo, "Ohhh...! Who's adorable? You are, that's who!"
The subsequent beating would be totally worth it.
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Sorry for the confusion! This story WAS on hiatus, now it's not. Just forgot to change it.
6614477 Woo! I look forward to more then!
6614477 Yay!
I still love this characterization of Chrysalis: it's simultaneously haughty and defeatist.
I believe i have discovered the one disliker of this story: Chrysalis
This chapter in a nutshell.
Shining Armor: "Enemy friendship okay?"
Luna: "Yes! Let the friendship double!"
&
Chrysalis: "Do I friendship?"
Cadence: "Yes! All aboard the friendship train!"
Twilight: "I don't know who you are Prism Brush, but come with me if you want to friendship!"