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Ah yes, as editor I approve of this story!
Great work with what you put together mate. From what I saw earlier, and what I'm reading now, you improved this a lot!
may want to proof read your chapters a bit dude...
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1836028 There's more...?
i wish i had more time to help proof read, but its still awesome, great work.
"And shit hits the fan." -I don't know where I got that from.
I was intrigued.
So little Diamond Dog clop out there.
I was intrigued.
"make a pet out of each one of them"
I was intrigued.
Now I am leaving.
Damn... The frackin grammer in this made me grimace but damn that was good ... Bout time somebody wrote diamond dog clop that didn't involve rape.
1835711 It doesn't bode well when the editor can't write one short sentence without randomly capitalizing words.
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My Ipod does not like me
Really it just wants to put in capitals everywhere.
Heh, basically what i'm trying to say is that when I type a comment quickly I tend to make capital mistakes.
But because I have a feeling you won't be satisfied with this, so I've changed the comment accordingly.
Now we can all live in peace
Well after reading this I have one thing to ask....and that is will you continue? Lol.
Absolutely incredible!
There are numerous spelling and grammar errors but... this is really good.
The pacing is excellent. The psychological aspects of it are very well done.
Just fix up the spelling and grammar and it would be the best!
Sorry, I can't point out the errors at this current moment in time so... Yeah!
Great story so far. You might want reread your story to look for mistakes.
Sorry, but I just can't read this. The grammar is terrible. I realize you're an ESL, so I'm not going to insult you or anything, but I just can't read something with grammar that bad.
I love it
1836028 ... yes?
ugh im dying to see him write some more stuff please come back and update soon!
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2400506 good to know
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enjoy
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...quite a few grammatical errors... ...not sure if it's because he's a diamond dog, or if a proof-reader's needed...
update soon?
Diamond Dog and sex. You sir, have all my love and respect, as you probably can guess.
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Ahem.
"Iron Will makes a Porno" chapter one.
"Clop, Clop" chapter "In the Hall of the Diamond Dogs"
And for one I didn't write, "Carnality"
Are you ever going to update this? T-T
2619157 3rd chapter is almost ready
2619903 HURRA!!!!!!
Lets celebrate with these
Yay! More Diamond Dog porn!
And because the description doesn't say, I'm doing proofreading duties on this too.
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It does say now.
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Finally!
Sleeping will have to wait.
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I also notice you put a metal gear solid reference in there.
yay I thought it was gonna take 4ever
love this story
WOOOO NEW CHAP!!! LETS CELEBRATE!!!
for you some molestia
and this to
And then they all fucked!
Well apparently Rainbow dash knows nothing about ponies best friend, or honor of the pack.
I liked it, but the gramatical errors kept me from reading more than half of it
3498895 she doesn't know anything about dogs, and she doesn't care.
4101726 it's going to pass through edition before next chapter.
when will this be updated?
4179979 Next Friday?
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IT LIVES!
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They all still in danger.
Still good. For someone who is nit a native english speaker this is great. The text is a bit cobbled and awkward at points but its better than a lot of things I have read. Keep it up.
Did you find a proofreader? I'm sorry I didn't reply sooner but I have limited chances to do so.
Always good to see another fan of Black Dog. And nice cliffhanger.
Well... What will happen next.
And how he going to get out of this one.
4303108 :) thx.
4304412 rule of clop tell us that if something can be bucked, then it'll be bucked. But right now I would like to finish another story about Maud, and next chapter of harmony side effects