This is my first fanfiction that I wrote. The other two I have uploaded were written after this one, I just didn't upload this one first. The Doctor falls through a strange wormhole while he was regenerating and ends up in Equestria as a pony. He is sucked into an epic story with the local mail mare, Ditzy Doo (Derpy Hooves).
I suggest an editor or beta-reader to start off. Otherwise, to me, this simply isn't readable
love it. I was actully thinking of writing a story like this, but with the actuall pony 'doctor whoves' being the doctor and river as a pony writing 'Hello Swetie' all over the hospital. :P. hehe I gues I'm not the only Whovian on this site :P Whovian bronies and Pegasisters rock!
But I guess you have stepped forth with the idea first :P.
1961356 Thank you And yep, Brovians (Which is a term me and another Brovian made up, unless it has already crossed the internet and we are late to the party XD) are indeed, freaking awesome XD
1961076 I'm confused, what is wrong with it?
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Small grammatically relevant stuff really that bugged me.
Hehe wan't to be friends?
1961507 vwarp is a sound effect and the defiantly is my spell checks first choice if i accidentally spell definitely wrong XD Sorry about that, i shall correct them instantly, thank you for the notification!
1961609 Sure! I love making new friends
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That sorta degrades it then. If you're writing sound effects make them distinctively different from the context, italicize it or bold it or something. Because it makes it look like a spelling error.
1961825 Ah, thank you, i have fixed it up :3
First comment yay! hehe.
Anyway great plot, it gets better each time
1963874 And thank you!
What I think you should do after is do the eleventh doctor. That would be hilarious, what would Aimee look like? And river ate that.
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1963918 If i do a continuation if this fic, it will have either more Ditzy, or Twilight. Both actually, im going to branch it off into two storylines depending on an interactive choice that the reader makes. It happens next chapter (Which is going to be a pretty long chapter, idk when its going to come through). But i have yet to make a sequel. It kinda just cliff hangs on one choice and then the other is an okay ending, but really you would want more. XD
Ok then I c
1963962 Yeah, i have already written it, it was my first fanfic actually, but i just never got around to typing it up XD It just plays off in the way of either Derpy of Twi if i feel like writing a sequel, lol
Sounds cool, my first fanfic was TLK-related. I think it was about I can't remember what it was about. But I am sure I uploaded it to my FanFic.net account.
1963978 TLK?
The Lion King.
1963991 Ahh, lol. That was a great movie XD.
I can't wait! I like it. It isn't the best I have read, but it is a nice story, and I am enjoying it.
1977239 Yeah, thank you I'm not aiming super high, i could never hope to be as great as RobCakeran 53, but i'll still write XP
I'll read both. and yes, I have only just read this.
Is there any rainbow dash involved? if so, I'll read that first.
1979707 She comes in a little later in the story, only on the choice where you choose to save the Doctor though, lol
K then; the doctor first.
1981189 I'm going to upload them at the same time and let you guys choose which one you want to do, of course you can read both of them
I know, I'm just saying I'll read the doctor first.
1983169 Ah, lmao
Eccleston-Tennant is it? :P
I kind of wanted a happy ending for Ditzy and The Doctor. This makes me sad.
How Did you know? You read my mind.
2024513 I just did it on how the Doctor would actually react in a situation of such
2024512 It goes from Tennant to just a new and random regeneration XD
uuhh this is copying do you have permission to? im talking about doctor whooves and the assistant
3665587 lolwut? Sorry bro, but no. I didn't copy shit. The only non-original fic I have is Awoken and that SUCKED. I have references to Doctor Whooves and the Assistant, but it's nowhere near the same story, hell, I've only seen the first 4-5 episodes (Whichever was animated on YouTube). You can write your story, but don't come here accusing me of shit.