So... I've been writing again · 3:38pm Apr 6th, 2016
Just not Sundown. When I started that project I really underestimated how it would affect me. However not all is bad. I have started writing again and once I get it into a state that I wouldn't be completely embarrassed to publish I will release it for your enjoyment. Its a tale of sirens, identity crises, trust, and what it means to live.
Yea... I don't think I can write without a lot of heady psychological bullshit making its way into the narrative.
2225497 Eheh... Well I liked that story so it gets thrown in the dungeon that is my favorites list with the others. I thought the philosophical concept that the story poses was very thought provoking. Good Job.
Thank you for adding Baby Pictures to your favorites! Feedback is always appreciated!
2162401 Thank you! You're so nice! Why do people on this site have to be so mean cuz I'm learning?!
Sorry...thank you.
2162393 Its cause its an obvious learner's style, but I read it all in one go, and I find a marked improvement over time. The best kinds of stories to me are the ones where I can see not just the characters grow but the author as well. I personally would like to see more bite to Sunny, but I can see where your characterization comes from and head injuries sometimes do result in personality changes. (Which is actually more common than amnesia)
I say keep at it. Don't expect perfection and to please everyone, but never be satisfied and try your best!
2162390 Thank you! I have a lot of people say that my story is very...subpar for a Sunset story. Thank you for liking it!