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Foal Star


Just a Brony who writes fun Fanfiction

Jun
9th
2024

Thoughts on A Flurry of Emotions · 6:58pm Yesterday

I love the interactions with Flurry Heart in this episode, and I rather enjoyed how pure the slice of life it was. The episode mainly focuses on Twilight being suddenly asked to babysit Flurry Heart by Shining and Cadance, who both are attending an art show. However, Twilight is also tasked with having a "story hour" with some sick foals at the hospital, so she tries to juggle being a babysitter while getting ready to see the foals at the hospital simultaneously. So Flurry Heart is constantly

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May
31st
2024

Thoughts on All Bottled Up · 2:31am May 31st

This episode is one that I have mixed feelings about, not that it was terrible, seeing it's one where we have Starlight having issues with Trixie's behavior and bottling it up "literally" while Twilight and her friends are out doing an Escape Room. First, this episode has my favorite song from the entire show."Best friends until the end of time." It's such a fun and catchy song in a somewhat random episode. But it captures the mane six well and shows how close they are. But the main focus is on

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May
30th
2024

Thoughts on Celestial Advice · 11:03am May 30th

This is the first time a Season Opener has not had some crisis in Equestria; in fact, it is more of an Epilogue to the ending of Season Six. Overall, I have some mixed feelings about this episode. It's not bad; I think it works, but I feel the impact would have been better if Season Six had been planned out better. First, the plot is about Starlight, Thorax, Discord, and Trixie getting "medals of Honor" for saving Equestria at Twilight's Castle. Then Discord starts to push Twilight into

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Apr
27th
2024

Eight years · 2:01pm April 27th

I have officially been on Fimfiction for 8 years!? It doesn't even feel like it's been that long. Well, I'll probably be writing Fimfiction for another few years. Time flies, and I have to say that despite all the time it takes to write my stories, it's well worth it. I really don't plan on stopping, as this is a way to keep myself busy, and overall, I enjoy writing my crazy stories and seeing how they turn out.

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Mar
29th
2024

Ranking every episode in Season Six based on personal preference. · 11:13pm March 29th

Season 6

1st place: Gauntlet of Fire

2nd place: To Where and Back Again, parts 1 & 2

3rd place: The Times are a Changeling

4th place: The Crystalling Parts 1 & 2

5th place: Saddle Row & Rec

6th place: A Hearth's Warming Tail

7th place: No Second Prances

8th Place: Stranger than Fan Fiction

9th Place: The Gift of the Maud Pie

10th place: Viva Las Pegasus

11th Place: Flutter Brutter

12th place: The Fault in Our Cutie Marks

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Mar
29th
2024

To Where and Back again Parts One and Two · 10:58pm March 29th

This is the Season Six Finale, and I have to admit this was really good as it did a fantastic job wrapping up the season's main plot points very well and gave us more world-building with the Changelings. I mainly liked how it was centered around Starlight Glimmer, as most of the episodes focused on her dealing with her past and making amends, and this was the ultimate challenge for her not to abuse her powers while being in charge. The main plot in the first half revolves around this issue as

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Mar
25th
2024

Thoughts on Top Bolt · 3:22am March 25th

This is another episode I felt like abit out of place, but I did enjoy watching it as I relate to Vapor Trail a lot. The idea of this episode is mainly centered around two ponies: a shy, somewhat nervous mare named Vapor Trail and a stallion Pegasus, who is rather full of himself named Sky Stinger. The two usually work as a team as new cadets training to be a part of the Wonderbolt Academy, but later in the episode, it's revealed that Sky Stinger is only good at flying because Vapor Trail is

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Mar
25th
2024

Thoughts on Where the Apple Lies · 2:53am March 25th

This episode is one that I would not expect to be in season six, but it was one of my favorite episodes in the season, given how it gives us some backstory to the Apples, which I honestly enjoy when an episode focuses on the Apple family. The episode is basiclly a fable to teach Apple Bloom about telling lies and how Applejack got herself into a heap of trouble lying to Filthy Rich about selling him some Apple Cider when Granny is strict about it being sold only on their farm due to

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Mar
25th
2024

Thoughts on P.P.O.V · 2:22am March 25th

This episode was odd but good, as it felt like the first time we saw actual conflict between the mane six in a while. I felt like this maybe would work in earlier seasons, but seeing the Mane Six still have conflict with each other despite being friends for a few years now shows they still have issues with each other, and it makes their relationship feel more natural. So basiclly, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, and Applejack went on an outing on a boat, which ended up getting sunk, and then they all blame

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Feb
8th
2024

Thoughts on Every Little Thing She Does · 4:09am February 8th

This episode is one of the more interesting episodes in season six. Weird enough, Starlight Glimmer wasn't in this season all that often despite her being the former antagonist staying in Ponyville. It's odd that we don't see her progress through friendship lessons like Twilight did in Season One. This would've helped, in my opinion, with her character development, but besides that, this episode is basically Starlight's version of Lesson Zero, where she tries using a spell to help her achieve a

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