Equestria Battleship Yamato Chapter 1 Revamped Ver. Uploaded! · 12:34am Apr 7th, 2020
I've already uploaded the revamped version of Chapter 1๐
Whew it took me like around 4 months to fix and make a few changes in Chapter 1 to make the execution and story easier to understand. Also I noticed that my old Chapter 1 is around 5000 words and now the revamped Chapter 1 is around 8000 words๐. Sorry I haven't uploaded the next Chapter 2 due to some real life situations and mostly fixing Chapter 1. So yeah I hope you guys like the Chapter 1 revamped version.
Thanks for the watch.
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I wouldn't know who to recommend. As for changes, Sometimes commenters tend to be the best at suggestions. Or finding someone that does that kind of thing.
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Good news my friend ive done four chapters of 'Blue Steel Yamato' and it will be uploaded soon but before i continue the rest of the chapters I need someone that you know that checks or highlights my fanfic to see what things i need to change and etc. Thank you
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No worries man๐
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For following me on here. The way I worded it is mainly cause that's what I usually say on DA when someone "watches" me ^^; Sorry.