3391128 I liked what I read and can't wait to read more. Keep doing what you are doing and I'm sure you will get many more people to favorite and follow your work.
3289753 No problem. You have the start of a really good story. Are there things I can see that need improvement? Yes. Do I believe that you will improve as you go? Also yes, and I can't wait to watch you grow as you write.
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Thank you
3391128
I liked what I read and can't wait to read more. Keep doing what you are doing and I'm sure you will get many more people to favorite and follow your work.
Thank you for the favourite, it really means a lot to me
3289753
No problem. You have the start of a really good story. Are there things I can see that need improvement? Yes. Do I believe that you will improve as you go? Also yes, and I can't wait to watch you grow as you write.
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