The Collar · 11:22pm Dec 28th, 2019
This story is basically centered around Twilight (Sparkle), and the "Adventure" she has.
I chose to present an activity each day, over the copy/paste style. Applying fresh and new details about "Twilight" and the location, where she is right now. (in the story)
We follow the girl, registered as Ms. A; throughout her stay at the Twilight Hotel, and beyond.
If I could have referred to her as Twilight Sparkle; but that would not have worked, for the staff serving her in the story.
I had to choose, which event to present, and which change to apply onto the character. If you feel, the choice could have been better, or just have ideas of how it could or should have gone down? Please let me know, maybe I could make adjustments to make the story even better.
While I know, you can't see the final word-count now; but it feels rather monumental, to me.
Maybe the initial 3000 words is not all that much? I know, I have seen longer initial chapters.
Maybe I should not reveal too much, right now? Before you have read the story, all assuming you enjoy this story? So I stop here, for now.
