The next few days saw the newest alicorn resident slowly recovering, or at least Ted hoped she was recovering. The mare slept like a rock, clung to Ted when she was awake, and generally stared at nothing in particular when she wasn't being spoken to. Pandinus still scared her slightly, being a queen and also someone who could easily get in her head if the queen wished, but otherwise the mare was emotionally deadened.
"Sounds like whiplash." Luna said one night after he'd mentioned it, the blue mare gently stroking Cadance's mane in the dream realm. Even here she was quiet, not talking to anyone. She just clung to her aunt for support and stared at the ground or into the distance. "She went from t- a bad experience to being freed but mentally bound to the changelings, to being offered a safe place and even reunited with my sister and I. She's been through much over the last few years. I think she's just letting it all slide by her for now, letting her mind recover from it all." Luna shook her head, looking at Cadance. "I know this is odd, but Tia had me talk to somepony who was, what did she call it? He was a doctor for one's mind. I thought it a silly thing, but it helped me deal with my situation immensely after my return. Perhaps, if you can..."
"I'll keep an eye out for psychologists, Luna." Ted said, shifting a wing to pull the two closer.
So they sat there, the three alicorns pressing against each other, keeping the pink mare between them and pressing into her reassuringly even as the darker alicorns continued their magic lessons. Ted had abandoned the idea of leaving Cadance to her own dreams after the first two nights. Despite his best efforts, her dreams quickly devolved into nightmares, even as he sat inside of them. It was easier that way. She didn't dream, she was just able to hold onto someone she knew, people she trusted.
Nearly a week after the pink alicorn began following him like a second shadow the Temple received its first important visitors. Certainly the dragon quartermaster from their northern neighbor was well and good, and the griffons and changelings that had found their way to the Temple over the course of the last week. But this was the start of something big.
Cimmerian was in his war room as usual that morning, going over the needed expansions to both the Temple grounds and the last few material runs required before they would be able to repair the dock and storage shed. He'd been worried that the damage from the blast and the number of bodies would be a problem for repurposing the old town, but the only problem seemed to be getting the materials to rebuild it. The dead changelings were all but gone when he'd next visited the town, and the pony soldiers were nothing more than gnawed bones. Even the glass from the blast wasn't easily visible, the shifting sand of the beach covering it as the glass settled lower. The only issue at that point was the stench of dead fish, but even that was fading, other sea life and scavengers moving in to the once-again safe shores to feast on the bounty.
A griffon runner, standing at the doorway ruffling his feathers nervously, drew the alicorn from his plans. Looking up, he chuckled at the tom's anxiety. Some of the griffons were still getting used to the idea of living under his rule.
"Well? I know you're not here because you think I'm cute. What's going on?" He asked the griffon, drawing a nervous smile from his guest.
"A group of armored griffons just arrived from Zarris, sir. Demanded to be granted an audience with the alicorn of the Temple of the Shadows." the griffon answered. His gaze wandered a moment, before returning to the dark-furred ruler. "I think it was Talon mercenaries, the armor had the slash marks on the front."
"Really?" Ted asked, adopting a thoughtful smile. "I wonder if Herrick's put that rune to use already. Oh, this I've got to hear." The alicorn rose from his work quickly, his aura shuffling his desk into a neater pile even as he walked to the doorway. "Don't just stand there, lets go!" He said to the messenger, brushing past the griffon in his haste.
The alicorn passed many in the crowded hallways of the first floor. The Temple was busy as ever, creatures running back and forth, the mess hall having shifted to an all-day buffet and Slop taking on several more assistants to keep up with the demand. Hunting teams were going out constantly, a mix of several griffons, a gnoll guide, and sometimes a changeling, the emotional radar adding a little more safety. Injuries were common, but only one hunting party had actually been lost; another gnoll den had ambushed them, taking the hunters prisoner. Pandinus had immediately alerted him to not only the event, but the location of the den. A single show of force later, the destruction wrought by both an angry alicorn and a protective queen leaving the outside of the den a smoldering wreckage and several of the den's guards dead, and they not only had another den offering them tribute, but Ted managed to get this one to agree to the rules he'd planned on enforcing with the den that had attacked the Temple. For all the speed at which they responded though, it was still the first losses they'd suffered, and the alicorn and changeling had both spent the evening comforting each other.
For Cimmerian, it was his first loss of those under his rule. It was a reminder that things weren't always going to go smoothly, and that even things that were routine could be lethal.
For Pandinus, it was the first loss of a drone in her hive. She was left stunned for a few moments, having still been connected to the drone when a gnoll had decided to kill it. She described to him in detail the sensations the drone felt as his life left him, said she could sense his fear even as he hoped his Mother would reach him in time. She didn't though, they weren't fast enough. By the time they'd reached the den, he was gone. Twenty seven dead gnolls later, and she was demanding the drones body, personally carrying the remains back to the temple. A service was held for those lost, and a half-day was declared the next day, the alicorn publicly offering his time to any who needed an ear.
It was the first time he'd seen the queen so shaken. The first time she'd felt loss, felt just how fragile those under her rule were. She spoke to him, as they'd promised each other. She held onto him that night, and she asked him if she could feed on his sorrow, even if it was bitter. She wanted to use it, to feel the loss the way ponies did. The way everyone else did.
Shaking the memories from his mind and walking outside, he was soon joined by the queen, seemingly arriving out of nowhere as he made his way to the group of soldiers. She was connected to so many changelings by this point, she was able to keep tabs on almost any creature there. It was a bit creepy sometimes, but also useful. There were never any long searches for individuals he wanted to speak to.
"Where's Cadance?" Cimmerian asked casually, not even bothering with surprise at her arrival anymore. She'd probably been getting ready to send a changeling with the same news when the griffon went to speak to him.
"Sleeping in again. Amare is with her, so you'll be seeing both when she wakes up." The queen said with a hint of irritation. "I still don't understand why she doesn't try asking me over the link. It would be so much easier than asking through the proto queen she's so attached to."
"We've been over this Din, the link's not natural to her. It scares her." He answered, a grin forming on his face at the familiar sight of the Talon leader.
"Good morning, Herrick, what brings your company out here on this fine fall day?"
The griffon gestured to his side with the sweep of his wing. "A few friends of mine wanted to send their regards to the one responsible for allowing the first successful tweaks of the pony queen's nose since she started using those changeling swarms. You were right about the swarms, too. Break the crystals, and the damn things fall on whatever's nearby, including each other. I've even received reports of changelings being discovered after the crystal's been destroyed, and my toms have said they're often willing to part with any and all information they may have. It's been amazing. As for those behind me? These are representatives sent by my brothers."
"Kass Talon sends his regards milord." the first griffon said. "Sergeant Adne at your service."
"Bemot Talon sends his thanks for the runes." the second said as she stepped forward. "Sergeant Lorah stands in his place."
Finally a cloaked pony stepped forward. "Jantis Talon sends his thanks for the aid." The mare then pulled out a small bag, an orange hoof putting it on the ground between them. "He also sends two hundred gold bits in reimbursement for the strategies and suggestions he's started using against the Mad Queen. They've been most helpful."
"It's a pleasure to meet all of you." Cimmerian said with a bow. "Though I'm curious why a griffon would send a pony in his place."
"I have earned his respect, and-"
"And she's full of hatred for you." Pandinus cut her off, stepping between Cimmerian and the cloaked pony. "Why are you truly here. Do you intend to try to harm him? The one creature that has offered mercy to my race?"
Before anyone could react, the griffons were all shoved out of the way, twenty changelings surrounding the mare with fangs bared. Four more jumped the mare, pinning her to the ground.
"What it the meaning of this?" Herrick yelled, shock and anger in his voice.
"She carries hate. So much hate she's likely willing to do something foolish." Pandinus snapped, pushing through the line of changelings. "I will not let you threaten him, little pony. He is my home, he is my food, he is my safety, and if you think you will harm one strand of his mane, I'll-"
"That's how they get you." The restrained mare shouted, tears visible under her hood. "They make you need them, make you think life doesn't run without them watching over you." She looked at Cimmerian. "It's always the Tartarus-damned alicorns! It's always your race, showing up to save the day! The princesses were wonderful, they watched over everypony and the second they were gone, nopony knew how to take care of themselves. It was disgusting! Then she came along, she brought Luna back, she made everything happy again, she grew up, even became strong enough, smart enough to turn into an alicorn. Lo and behold, Tirek attacks, leaving ponies picking up the pieces again as she's showered with praise. What about those who were hurt? Those who stood against him knowing they could do nothing to stop him? Nothing! Now she's gone nuts, she took our families, she took our hope! And then you have the gall, the ovaries to show up as an alicorn, leading a wonderful little paradise here. Why does your kind always show up when things are at their worse?! Why don't you buckin' alicorns go find your own planet to wreck?!? Why, why do we have to get stuck in the middle of your mess..."
The mare's tirade devolved into sobs, leaving the witnesses of the spectacle feeling a little unsure of the situation. Ted moved towards the line despite Din's warnings and leaned down to the mare's level.
"Who did she take from you?" He asked, pulling back her hood to reveal an orange haired and purple maned mare. She was battle-scarred, many small cuts running up and down her visible body.
She stared at him through wet eyes. "She stole my mentor, my hero, my everything...
"...That nag took Rainbow Dash from me."
"And who is Rainbow Dash." Cimmerian asked her, not flinching at the hatred she spat at him.
The orange mare snorted at him. "Figures you don't know, she's not impor-"
"I've only been active in this world for a few months, miss." He cut her off impatiently. "I've been doing everything I can to make a safe place for anyone and everyone who comes to me. I've also had to be weary of overextending. I've nearly made several mistakes, but thankfully most of the locals aren't fans of the Mad Queen. Meanwhile the griffons are being over-run by changeling hordes under the control of the Mad Queen, what resistance do you think I'll be able to mount here with less than five hundred creatures of various races, mostly changelings and griffon refugees? The only thing many of those here started with was working limbs to help us build, some didn't even have that and ended up spending time in the infirmary."
"Help me, miss. Tell me how to keep those around me right now safe while bringing more under my wings. I'd see this entire world sleeping in peace if it was in my power, and maybe someday it will be. You see alicorns as storm-crows, signaling the worst of times. I am doing my damnedest to be a light-bearer, bringing hope to those who have none. I've bled for this city, I've personally fought for many of those here. Ask around; they'll all confirm it. I'm not some deity sitting in a tower and throwing around orders. I even have a good portion of the residents here calling me Father, because they need family. They need the stability after what they've suffered. That is my job right now, that is my sole mission, my goal. Tell me how I can help you, how I can help this Rainbow Dash, and I will do everything I can to do so."
The mare stared at him, anger warring with the newly delivered information. She didn't believe it, there was no way he was that good. Calling an alicorn Father? What madpony would do such a thing?
"Cimmerian, we have a problem." Pandinus whispered into his ear. "She woke up, and she's having a panic attack again. She's still clinging to Amare, but she's screaming at anyone else who gets near her."
The orange mare's ears perked up at the information. "Who? Who's screaming? Who did you hurt?!?"
Ted sighed. "I didn't hurt anyone. A mare came into my care recently, she was tortured by the Mad Queen for a long time. She was quiet at first, and I thought she'd be ok, that she'd recover. But as soon as she started sleeping again, she, she kinda fell apart." Turning to the gathered griffons, he smiled sadly.
"I'm sorry, gentlemen. I'll return as soon as I can. For now, I gave my word to two very important people that I'd watch over this one. Pandinus, do you think you can take over as host for me? If not, I'm sure we can-"
Queen Pandinus put a hoof to his lips, chuckling. "I understand. She needs her comfort, and you made a promise. I'll take care of things here. If it gets out of hoof, I'll call Amald or Shadow Weaver." As she finished speaking, she lowered her hoof and pecked him on the lips.
As the alicorn trotted hastily to the Temple, the Queen of the Temple's Hive returned her attention to the griffons. A grin played across her face as she tasted each one's reaction.
"Yes, he did just leave a changeling queen to see to your wellbeing. Yes, I will do just as he would have; Lady Thrisha's lessons were quite thorough on hospitality and she'd have my shell if I ruined my first actual chance to put those lessons into practice." The queen chuckled darkly her grin widening into a toothy smile.
"And yes, I was being serious when I said he was very important to me." She said, turning her smile upon the still restrained mare. Instantly all mirth was gone, her smile becoming cold and foreboding. "And his kindness to all his guests is the only reason I haven't rendered you incapable of harming him. I could easily enchant a tired, angry mare like yourself with the plentiful energy I have access to, but he finds mental manipulations of any sort to be the most heinous of crimes. So thank him next time you see him; he's the only reason I've not ripped apart your mind to be certain you're no threat to him."
The queen's ear flicked, and she turned back to the griffons. "I've asked Gleam, and she said we currently have some unused land that's been cleared on the northern side of the yard. Your soldiers are welcome to set up camp there for your stay. We'd offer you actual rooms, but all of ours are currently occupied, even with most of my hive keeping to the tunnels at night."
Herrick was the first to find his voice, seeming to come to a realization. "The alicorn that was reported to be wandering around with the other residents of the Temple. I'd wondered if they were just getting his color wrong, but the descriptions match you too perfectly. That was you, wasn't it?"
"Guilty as charged." She said with a much more pleasant smile. "This way please, and keep an eye on your pony. Cimmerian may be a bleeding heart for such cases as hers, but I will put her down if she threatens my hive."
The griffons nervously began to follow the queen to a nearby clearing, this one not yet being used for anything, but the wood still having been cleared for use in other locations. The commanders set about making camp, the orange mare keeping well away from the changelings most of the time. As they were finishing up, Herrick approached the changeling queen once more.
"I have to ask, how does a changeling become so attached to a pony?" The warrior asked. "I don't think I've ever heard of such a relationship before. Doesn't your feeding hurt him?"
Din smiled as she watched the griffons go about their work, before waving a hoof back to the Temple. "You saw the changelings wandering the Temple, didn't you? Most of them have joined my hive, their own hives being subjugated by the Pony Queen. I have a hive because he gave me a chance. I have food because he offers his own emotions to me. Because they're freely given, their potency increases tenfold. He's never complained to me about fatigue after I've fed, my first feeding excluded.
"I have safety because our hives work together, bound together as a single hive despite the differences. Both work for the betterment of the whole." The queen raised a hoof, absentmindedly rubbing a small section of her barrel, just below her ribs. "I have everything I want here, and it's because he offered it to me. Why would I not be protective of my mate? Thrisha has told me many times that griffons can be, how did she say it?" The queen's voice shifted, gaining years of experience to it. "'Downright stupid when it comes to defending the life or honor of a mate when they believe it is in danger.'" Pandinus said in a perfect imitation of the hen's voice.
The griffon chuckled "I'll have to speak with her again sometime. I spent some time over in Frostborne a long while ago, and I think I remember her. Stubborn old hen, not surprising she'd still be causing problems." Something the changeling said connected just then. "Wait, did you say mate?"
I bet it's Applebloom.
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Damn, you beat me to it.
6348769 Well, you know what they say...
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Nice to see that Scootaloo is still about, makes you wonder about the rest of the Crusaders.
I take that as permission to demand you write even more. That's what that sort of comment means, right? Also you're just a writing robot slave, thus I can make that sort of demand with no remorse because you have no feelings to be hurt.
Oh. So it is still within a few years (decades?) of the defeat of Tirek, so the main six still live. Thought they were turned to stone to keep em alive longer and all that.
So, we finally have a bit more concrete a timeline. Assuming this pony is who we all think she is, then that means this story is about 30-40 years post-showtime.
Could have sworn he was in that armor nearly twice that, but I also can't find any early chapter numbers to back that up.
Anyways, always love it, keep up the excellent work!
I could tell as soon as she said that Rainbow dash had been taken from her that it was scootaloo
Yes you write a lot. We ask because it's amazing.
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There is no doubt.
So we have a rough estimate of the timeline for the story, 20-50 years after the canon. Can't remember if we'd had other clues, but this is a pretty solid one.
Wow, Scootaloo must really have a hate boner for alicorns. I mean, between Luna, Twilight and the mad queen, Cimmerian must look like a new pretender. Plus the whole imprisoning of her big sister with a petrifaction spell and then she runs into him after so long with the mad queen. Of course she is going to hate Ted. He must seem like such a lazy con artist of some one working for the mad queen.
To be honest I was half expecting it to be one of the CMC before the hood was removed, most likely Scootaloo.
6348799 They were throwing around the number forty when talking about his time in the armor.
Please fix this.
Anyways, good chapter. I liked it a lot.
Saw this story update in my gmail feed awhile back but was on a writing binge and couldn't check it. I've never been so upset at being unable to check an update. Well done sir, your chapter made me awkwardly imitate a certain individual.
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I give this story a 1/10
Best story on fimfic.
What if cimerrian just... Exploded like poof, gone forever I methinks that all the ponies wouldn't take it very well. But maybe they would like "yay I'm happy 'cause rainbows 'n shit"
As a parallel with this chapter, I was wondering how about the minotaurs and their fortresses? Because there's where the hammer will strike the hardest. Any chance that Ted can send some observers to see what they can see and bring information back?
so... Scoots Hates ted/[i do not care for the spelling of his name] because race...
Gosh! why is everyone in this story a racist... I blame the nine divines for that...
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It could be either, though my guess is that it's a different creature of the same species.
As to the original creature, a magical being ran away to a non-magical world. Celestia and Luna warned Ted his new body wouldn't do well there, and I imagine for a more purely magical being like the nightmare would it would be something akin to a person "escaping" to a world with no atmosphere.
I hope he asks for Talon to bring him any captured changelings; there's nothing so loyal as a lost dog that has found a home.
Wonder where the rest of the triplets are.
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Different.
The Original Nightmare Moon is currently enjoying retail work, and Ted's Half Life 3 preorder, way out on the other end of existence.
It has no magic, or map with which to make a return trip, it is only human now. Supposedly.
Twilight is currently possessed by the Original Nightmare Moon's relative, from wherever such parasites hail from.
And that Parasite learned from the various mistakes of the MLP villains...
The mare is definitely Scootaloo unless i'm forgetting about something from a previous chapter.
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A quote from chapter 4 "..And then I Jumped out and Yelled 'Supplies!" "There were actually holes all over most of the spells in her, no, his memories, but comparing them against each other in the apparent forty or so years he was trapped in the armor, he was able to fill in most of the holes. ".
Excellent. Gilda is my third favourite character behind Luna, then Fluttershy (who is tied with sunbutt).
Dear lord it's Scootaloo. Makes me curious as to the rest of the Crusaders and what happened to them. Probably learn that from Scoots.
and the chicken has appeared!
Omg it's daring doo.........
Uh-huh, sure...
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I think you forgot a few zeros in the first bit of that rating.
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That's a good thing! I'm sure the Temple will benefit from a steady source of eggs.
No, 'Din, don't worry, not that kind; the nutritious, edible kind!
It's gotta be Diamond Tiara. No other answer makes any sense whatsoever.
Otherwise: Great chapter! I do so enjoy how you write a lot. You write well and often. The perfect type of author for the needy readers on FiMFiction.
6348799 It has been 40 years. Cimmerian was sealed in the nightmare's armor for 40 years before this story begins proper.
Only thing that I won't like as this progresses is the sheer amount of hate that will be directed at Twilight even though we all know what's truly going on with The Mad Queen.
That is literally the only thing. Seriously I love this story.
Ted has some MASSIVE ovaries.
I really like Din's characterization; strong, dangerous, and almost murderously insane females are great in my book. Or maybe it is cause Din is a changeling queen... I really like the queens. I wonder if Herrick is worried about any changeling/alicorn hybrids, they will be a first.
We know where Scoots is now, but what about Sweetie and Apple Bloom? By my count the CMC will be in their late forties or early fifties. I have no idea how only that makes Shining, seventies? But... something something magic. Damn that magic.
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Who is to say Din's eggs won't make a good omelet?
Right. All the more reason for Ted to go on a parasite hunting crusade at the end of this.
Meanwhile with Cadance. Yeah, she's close to going off the deep end with all of the trauma.
Also, psychiatrists. We're going to need lots of those by the end of Cimmerian's Insurrection.
Scootachickeeeeen Nooooooo! Poor dodo.
Orange coat, violet mane, and speaks of Rainbow Dash as though said pegasus were a deity on a pedestal... If that ain't Scootaloo, I'll eat m- *suddenly Gibbs-slapped* OW! What the hell, Silver!?
Ye ain't flex'ble 'nough t' eat yer own mane. Now jus' sit back an' let th' lad procure th' next chapt'r, aye?
Fine, fine... take all the fun out of it, why don'tcha...
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Nah, I think it's Spitfire. I mean, it's a dark temple, yellow could easily be mistaken for orange.
6349152 Yeah, that's the problem with this kind of story, where the Big Bad is actually a posessed good guy. Even if the good guys win, which they usually do, but only after some serious losses, there's no-onje left to blame, no-one left to punish. The posessing entity is usually destroyed, usually fairly quickly, when you really want to see them suffer for all the evils they've wrought.
I shoulde say this story is really great though. Well written, with an intriguing twist on the usual replacment fics.
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I get the feeling that the Nightmare that possessed Luna was some young, brash demon parasite that didn't exactly know what it wanted except to wreck shit. It seems like whatever parasite that infected Twilight was working the long con and decided to be more subtle about it's power play. Possibly an older and wiser entity or perhaps a Nightmare that learned from it's mistakes and harnessed the infinite information of the internet to find its way back. Maybe the Nightmare continued Ted's college classes and learned that breaking big spells into a lot of little spells that carry small tasks is better than one big glob of magic. Maybe Nightmare went to the library and learned from our great tacticians. Maybe Nightmare picked up Warframe and thats why it took so long to get back. We'll never know.
6349214 have you not watched the mare-do-well episode?
Well, one assurance that Cimmerian can give Scootaloo, once he discovers that Rainbow Dash is one of the Element Bearers, is that she's still technically alive and can be restored from her current state as a stone statue. In fact, restoring Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, and Rarity is one of the essential steps required in order to remove a large section of the Mad Queen's stolen power and free Celestia and Luna. Restoring them is also a requirement if the Elements of Loyalty, Kindness, Laughter, Honesty, and Generosity are going to have the greatest chance of freeing the Bearer of Magic from the Nightmare possessing her body.
Mind you, I'm not sure Scootaloo is in any condition to understand that last bit just yet, but she may actually be on board once she's had some time to absorb the information if she finds out about it. She was in Ponyville when Nightmare Moon returned and was subsequently purged from Luna's body, as well as during Luna's second visit to Ponyville during Nightmare Night. Also, being Rainbow Dash's 'little sister,' Scootaloo has no doubt heard many retellings of the Mane Six's first adventure, so she knows the actual story in a way few other ponies are really capable of. The idea of another Nightmare entity existing that was capable of possessing Princess Twilight Sparkle would be very plausible to her.
However, she'd have to either be present first hoof to witness Twilight's exorcism, or hear about it directly from Rainbow Dash before she'd be willing to try to forgive Twilight of the Nightmare's crimes any time soon.
And if Scootaloo asks why Cimmerian hasn't spread the information about the other Bearers? Exactly how long would it take some hothead to conclude that destroying five statues to remove part of the Mad Queen's powers was easier and more convenient than attempting to do it the right way?
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Pegasus mare with an orange coat and purple mane? Obviously it's Orange Swirl
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Okay, light orange. Maybe more of an amber color. Nobody ever said the author was perfect.
6349214 Honestly? It is obviously Gilda disguising as Spitfire! No other answer but this and
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hm... i predict, confused griffins! oh and scootaloo. of coarse.
I may be late to the party, but;
Orange mare, no country accent, thinks Rainbow as a mentor and her 'everything'.
It's Scootaloo.
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It's 40 years. The story says so, cause Ted was stuck in the armour for 40 years.
Hmm... orange mare... knows an element of harmony... I have got it! It is totally Flash Sentry after a botched operation/spell. No? I am completely wrong?... well damn I have no idea.
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This may be true but also remember the fear others had for Luna when she was set free from the nightmare.
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Light orange and Pink mane.
Is not Orange and Purple.