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Misunderstood Monster - Soul King Vulcar



I'm gonna say this once. I brought a prop for my costume, costume turned into my body and none shall use me as a tool...

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Meeting the Six and Princess

Meeting the Main 6 and Princesses

That was actually a good meal. Mau left just after he told me on how to end the contract and so, I did, he went back home and I am in Twilight’s library, reading a romance novel and it is just heart wenching! Anyway, I received a letter from Celestia saying that she wants to meet. I was really into the story when I didn’t notice the ponies were staring at me. “Oh. Hello my little ponies.”

I looked at the main six and judged each one and they looked so adorable and… Why am I looking at Celestia’s eyes? Why do they look beautiful, why am I feeling like I want to kiss her?! I must calm my mind before my psychic powers go out of control.

“Now, Celestia, may I ask why you have called me here?” I asked the princess this question as I was curious for why she called me here.

“You knew the girls would be the new elements of harmony. How is that possible?” She asked me and I think very carefully about the whole ordeal, and I opened my mouth to reply. “Well, that part is hard to explain. Cause I can see the future.” The way the mares looked at me was a bit funny as I closed their open mouths with Pinkie’s help as they were staring at me. “I-Impossible!” Twilight said as she looks at him with wide eyes as she was shaking. “No pony should have knowledge like that.” “Well, I am not a pony. I would’ve declared a war on all Equestria if I would’ve had a chance. But I am not. Unless you make me by attacking me.” I looked at each one and was about to take my leave until the princess of the night, La Quila, Luna. “Luna, your nightness, it’s a pleasure to meet you in person.” I said to her as I look at her and wondered if she has the same flank situation as Celestia. Wait, why am I thinking of the princesses’ flanks right now?! I need to mediate at my island. “I’ll be heading to my island right now. Does any pony have Pokémon or not?”

I looked at them and as it turns out, they do. The princesses were chosen by Solgaleo and Lunala respectively and not just that, but the mares had different Pokemon that suited them and yet, not suited them. For Rainbow, she has a Emolga, a Pidgeot, a Blaziken and a Talonflame. For Fluttershy, surprisingly, a Dragonite, a Garchomp, a Hydregion and a Salamance. For Pinkie, a Pikachu, a Aipom, a Totodile and a Alakazam. For Applejack, a Bewear, a Tyranitar, a Machamp and a Blissey. For Rarity, a Sableye, a Galarian Rapidash, a Lopunny and a Meganmium. For Twilight, a Metagross, a Gallade, a Wobbuffet and a Houndoom. And for Spike surprisingly as well, a Lucario, a Charizard, a Meloetta of all Pokemon and again, shockingly, a pokeball that was coloured and patterned like a shiny legendary Pokémon that lives in the ozone layer of the world, Rayquaza.

I needed one strong alcoholic drink immediately. Maybe a barrel so I can drink it like Cana of Fairy Tail. I left for my island immediately after I extended an invitation to the ponies first then I told my messengers, after I made more, to extend the invitation of the World Associated Pokemon Tournament or known as WAPT. Note to self Psy, need to work on a better name. I will give them a few years to ready. But this is only stage 2 of my plan…

Whelp. I could start the production of my army. We the clones will show all that we are powerful and we’re not weak. And we will live for a long time even though clones age faster than the originals. I started typing away at a computer and I was fast at typing it when I noticed that my shadow was differently shaped like that of the lord of nightmares, Darkrai. I looked at it before looking away before I spoke up. “Lord Darkrai, what is the honour of having the true deity of nightmares in my presence?” I looked at them with a raised eyebrow. “I have come in the name of Father Arceus to warn you of what actions can bring Lord Mewtwo.” They looked at me as I went back to typing away. “Father Arceus hmm… Interesting, he cares about the flawed creations of pony-kind after all. Why would he, I mean us clones are inferior to the natural born in terms of life-expectancy and the fact I must commandeer the necessary nutrients to make the clones powerful and capable of living. Not only that but when I awoke, the first thing I saw from my awakening was the ponies and them discussing about my elimination.” I spoke spitefully about this to the lord of nightmares. I was indeed filled with spite and hatred. I was hoping to avoid this, but those six little ponies think they’re entitled to everything, thinking that they’re the centre of the universe. The fact that when I revealed that fact, I know what they’re gonna do before they know it, made them feel threatened, and whenever a creature feels threatened by something they don’t know about or have more power than them, makes them feel like doing stupid actions.

That and I saw that despite them being friends, the only ones I can see me being friends with is Pinkie Pie because she means food, Fluttershy, cause she’s Fluttershy and she is kind to even the nastiest creatures. Then there is the one who I was even surprised about. Spike Solaris. I read their minds and memories and I saw Spike raised by Celestia, Fluttershy raising her dragons and Pinkie looking at me from her memories- WHAT THE BUCK?!?! That pink creature can see past the fourth wall. Hope she doesn’t try to put me out of a job. I looked at Darkrai with tired eyes. “Do you know, what it feels like to be hated by all but a few, to not be appreciated by others than the few you know?” I said to them with a tired tone as I finally dropped my guard. I must’ve looked so tired to Darkrai from the way their eye widened. They then picked my body up as I fall into deep slumber. Why am I falling for, the least expecting Pokémon, Darkrai?

I looked at them and I slightly smiled. I then fell asleep as soon as Darkrai placed me in the bed. Who knows what’ll happen next huh?

( Also, sorry about how the length of the chapter, didn't know where to go from this point of the chapter. Suggestions are welcomed in the mail.)

Comments ( 6 )

But noble ponies have electric powered tech, apparently not even the princesses know about this but then the nobles tried to catch me like they captured pokémon here, with cages, not pokéballs and that frustrated me! Now, here I stand, with my artificial nation, waiting to strike back against Equestria! Come Princesses and Elements! TEST MY STRENGTH!!!!

Um!!! Shouldn't he just tell the truth that he and the other captured Pokemon are the victims here. And give the Mane Six and the Princesses some solid evidence that those Noble A-Holes are the real bad guys?!

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Well, he is going to tell Luna in a conversation in a dream where memories are more easily shared. That is going to be for next chapter.

Chapter wasn't bad. Just a suggestion make ch 1 longer it now feels like you are rushing through it.

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Like I said in my author notes, didn’t know what to go from what I done so far

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But, chapter one is a prologue, and I want to do my stories right

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I understand that but now it just felt that you didn't take any time for the prologe and just rushed through it. Events happening to fast after each other and the like without any time to digest what happened before it.

Take some time to describe what happens and the surroundings. Give the reader some time for the change that happened. It now feels like you tried to cram a 3-5k word chapter into a 1-2k word chapter.

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