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This story is a sequel to Urban Wilds


Amanita. Quiet. Awkwardly self-conscious. Necromancer. Reformed. Newly hired by the Royal Guard and the apple of its eye. How could she not be? She’s a peerless expert when it comes to necromancy. But only because she’s the only pony with any knowledge of necromancy beyond the basics, she tells herself. She needs to be more than just a static source of knowledge; she also needs to apply that knowledge, to expand her mind. She can’t live her whole life in a lab. She needs experience out in the field.

Which is how she finds herself assigned to a ley purification team. There’s something wrong with a ley line. It’s not immediately dangerous, but if left alone, it could corrupt the land, killing crops and creating monsters. Amanita is part of a small crew that will head to the line’s source, the small mining town of Tratonmane, to identify and correct the problem. Fortunately, ley purification is a well-known science. It’ll be easy.

At least, that’s the idea. Far to the north, swathed in frost and snow, walled in by vertiginous mountains, Tratonmane is as isolated as can be. Miners and subsistence farmers eke out a living in what little land they have. Ravenous wolves stalk the forest at its border. Whispers abound at the team’s arrival. Tratonmane has existed outside the Crown’s influence for centuries and many of the townsfolk don’t appreciate it sticking its nose in now. Especially since no town lasts for that long without getting a few skeletons in its closets. Amanita and her team will have to navigate hostile environments — personal and terrestrial alike — if they want to get to the bottom of this.

For if they don’t, heads will roll. Perhaps literally.

Nothing a necromancer can’t fix.


Updates TuThS. Reading earlier stories will provide some context for this, but isn't required. Other entries in this series:

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 73 )

Holy shit holy shit holy shit

Babe wake up the best OC oriented story on the site got another sequel

Welcome back, Amanita. This is going to be great.

...Not for you. For you this is probably gonna suck. But for us! Most enjoyable.

Yippee! Amanita is one of my favourite original characters. Her stories and the world around her is always so interesting.

Gosh, do I just adore seeing Amanita take the stage like that. That, plus all of the details making up each bit of the seminar--from Amanita working out how to show the guard, to the questions and answers between the ponies--made it all such a treat.

The creation of the corps is most interesting to me. I'm looking forward to seeing more of how that affects Amanita's thoughts of the future!

Oh, and of course, for me, it's Bitterroot.

Lovely opener! And the prologue bit is exactly my thing.

Such a pleasant surprise to see Amanita and Bitterroot's adventures continue. I'm eagerly awaiting what you have in store for us this time.

Ah, the horrifying prospect of public speaking. Forget relentless legions of the dead, those expectant eyes are far worse.

Eagerly looking forward to seeing what’s in store for Amanita. I’m sure it will only add to her notoriety, and I can only imagine how she’ll feel about that.

This premise looks super interesting, and now I have two whole fics to read up on to catch up to this point. But knowing you, it'll be very worth it

This made me look up how to write prologues, so I am happy to learn something new :twilightsmile:

Seeing Bitterroot and Amanita together again was like coming back to some old song you never quite forgot, and spending some time in the first verse remembering why you liked it so much.

Sure, they'll probably end up doing something incredibly dangerous, but at least their friendship is as saccharine as it is satisfying.

That first line would make Terry Pratchett grin

Usually I give a story a little bit of time to judge wether or not it's worth a star. Not this one, this one gets an automatic favourite from me, I'm just so thrilled to see more of my favourite necromancer and her plus one bounty hunter.

Just when I think nobody's posting good new fics anymore, you rise again.

Wooooot! Was just thinking about rereading this series!

I just finished Hinterlands and Urban Wilds recently, and words cannot convey my excitement at seeing this pop up in my feed.

AIN'T NO WAY, A SEQUEL?

To some of my favorite necromancy stories at that? Buck yeah! I get to reread the whole series again.

A very interesting start.

This is a great story already. I really like the bait and switch description concerning Amanita. Of course anyone who's read the previous stories isn't surprised by her behaviour.

This is a great chapter! It's no surprise that Bitterroot is coming along but I did not expect a kirin to show up.
I already like Charcoal she has a similar attitude to talking as Autumn Blaze.

Oh a new series with dark and mysterious figures and possibly goofy character

a second of staring, Amanita’s brain clicked: that person was a kirin.

Lesgo, more kirinsss

They like surviving winter. They don’t like winter itself. It’s like… It’s practically spite. You can be outside for ages in spring, summer, even fall.

You can only take only so many layers off before you run out in the summer, but winter you can make things as hot or cold as you like with more layers or more fire. And food doesn't perish as quick. And by far the most crucial, no mosquitos!!! Or any other pest like cockaroaches or ticks for that matter.

I am endeared towards Charcoal and really hope nothing bad ever happens to her. Ever.

I see you're planting a very large Chekov's Gun with that Foal's Breath, haha.

I like this kirin character.:twilightsmile:

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*Blinks* Now this is a familiar name

Always nice to see new friendships form. Though Charcoal’s assorted remedies has me concerned about what the state of the town will be given the ley poisoning. Sure, they shouldn’t see any effects for years, but still. (To say nothing of what contaminated it in the first place…)

In any case, looking forward to more.

“Hmm. That… makes sense. But it’s-”

That really makes sense if local earth/plant benders aka Earth ponies are ones coming in last.

Lumberjack ony speaks yak. I hope Lumberjack isn't the name

Continuing to really like the dynamic Charcoal brings to the story. Bubbly and immediately likable, but I can already see how she can be indispensable to the operation.

Bitterroot taping into the magical is a fun and unexpected point of interest. Where better than the midst of a leyline, I spose.

For a chapter fundamentally about our protaganists getting from point a to point b, you squeezed out a lot of characterization and worldbuilding

oh joyous of days, best necromancer is back!

If Tratonmane is considered weird by other small towns in the mountains soething very wird must be going on there. I like all te interactions between the passengers.

>Amanita after reattaching Bitterroot's head for the third time: "Uhhh, she was only 'mostly' dead?"

I remember the previous two entries in this series being great fun, so I'm hyped that there's a new one!

Amanita folded her ears back. “Mages should be… well-rounded, shouldn’t they? I mean, once everypony in the Crazy Eights catches up with me-”

“You think they will?”

“Eventually, yeah! I don’t have a master anymore, it’s just me, and- I’m just a necromancer, so once somepony else who’s a necromancer and also a decent illusionist comes along-”

Amanita's lack of confidence is too real. She seems to still have traces of the belief (from Circe?) that anypony who isn't useful is a waste of space. :ajsleepy:

The effect of stepping into somepony's memories reminds me of any of the point cloud/3d gaussian splatting demos: https://x.com/chrisoffner3d/status/1782078662826733805, https://youtu.be/VkIJbpdTujE.

I'm surprised Code didn't (respectfully) lock Amanita in a room and make her write down everything she knows. One more stake in the next dangerous adventure Amanita goes on is the potential loss of her necromancy knowledge to ponykind.

I'm with Midwinter: spectacular little place!

Really neat application of magic, here. It's so simple, yet so effectively pony! Especially the Equestria 'forgetting' borrowing part.

They are clues that the corruption of the ley line isn't something that happened overnight. I wouldn't be surprised if it started when the Ash tree stoped making leaves or maybe it started even earlier.

There's something mildly disturbing about the concept of night trees presented here. They're watching you. Waiting. :twilightoops:

Also, cool earth pony support magic!

This sounds like an intense sequel! The setup with Amanita joining the Royal Guard and being thrown into ley purification adds such an intriguing layer to the story. And the setting of Tratonmane sounds so atmospheric and foreboding, especially with its isolation and the lurking dangers. Can't wait to see how Amanita handles the challenges ahead and what secrets the town holds!

I'm like 99% sure Midwinter is the secret villain. She moves to town, and then the leyline sours shortly afterwards? And what other reason would a pony have to even come to Midwich in the first place, unless you were channeling the line's power into some sort of heinous super-ritual?

I wonder how much Amanita can pass off necromancy as advanced healing.

This isn’t a town with a dark secret. This is about half a dozen dark secrets in a municipality-sized trenchcoat trying not to collapse into one another. I can see a number of potential causes and symptoms; we’ll have to see what the first readings say to get a firm grasp on what’s what. And before that, there’s the matter of surviving that long…

Oh my. Something is afoot… ahoof?

Wait, Amanita's really quite young, isn't she? She lost Zinnia as a teen, did necromancy with Circe for 2 years, then spent 2 years in prison. (Then busted a serial killer in 2 days) Code has more ritual experience than Amanita's been alive, High Ritualist for 17 years, probably another decade working through the ranks? so Amanita's at most like mid 20s?

Unrelated, I just realized that the moment of death vision spell could be kinda broken if you have a guy willing to die over and over for 360 snapshots of a location.

maybe the wolves poisoned the leylines

“Ye stopped his bleedin’,” Crosscut said, nodding up the path. “That makes you’un a blood doctor. And thankee.”

“Okay, then,” said Amanita. “I just- I wasn’t sure what- that phrase meant, and- you​know​what​I’ll​shut​up​now.”

I can understand Amanita's discomfort. Blood doctor sounds awfully close to blood mage, which has very different connotations.

That said, considering how outlandish they townsfolk are, who knows how they'd really react to necromancy? They might actually be cool with it. After all, it's just letting the dead borrow your magic. :pinkiecrazy:

"This would'a been so much easier if you'd said you were a death doctor from the beginning."

I like how Amanita has already voiced the obvious but uncomfortable idea that there is more going on than it would seem at first sight.

“Tratonmane’s been eatin’ food frae it since afore I’s born and nopony’s gone bad yet. The line ain’t the problem.”

Says the pony who's never known another place.

Also, add the wolves to the list of things that started going wrong a few generations ago. Something shifted a while back and the wider world's only now realizing just how bad it was. The question is what changed and how it can be fixed. And how intentional it was...

Perhaps the villagers have been doing something wrong and unnatural for quite some time, and the Ley Line being corrupted is a consequence rather than a cause...

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