Hey! I would appreciate it if I could get some professional feedback on my masterpiece!

TAll Day, Everyday.

• MLP: FiM
• Comedy
• Drama
• Slice of Life

Follow the journey of a little girl who takes her football to the next level!

• Human
• Anthro
• Alt. Universe
• OC

Penanka72 · 127k words  ·  89  13 · 775 views

Just randomly self-promoting my work to get the story out there. Feel free to look at my other stories!

Thank you for reading friend!

Hey, saw your bio and wondered if you fancied checking out a comedy/slice of life sweetfic? ( Not complete as yet)

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/556033/delivering-on-sweetness-beyond
Derpy Hooves and Crafty Crate deliver a package to a world inhabited by a gentle and innocent generation of ponies. The destination is the residence of one Kimono, a connoisseur of the exotic and a local oddity whose maturity and wisdom sets her apart from her peers. Unfortunately, Crafty’s homeward journey is interrupted when the literal softness of the unfamiliar land causes his wagon to become stuck. Ocean Mist, Kimono’s protégé and innocent devotee of fairy tales, steps in to lend a tender hoof. While helping the strangers out of their pickle she learns a lesson in overcoming her limitations by embracing her identity.

Would love any fb :)

Thank you for the add!

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