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Cackling Moron


"Fluff" in the same way what collects under the sofa is fluff.

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Anon doesn't like Rarity, he just thinks about her a lot, is all. And that's only because he's worried he won't be able to repay her generosity at this festive time of year on account of his rather dire financial straits.

Following a pep talk - and a volley of snowballs - he decides to take a punt on making a meal for her.

Because why not?

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Comments ( 9 )

Wonderfully adorable. :twilightsmile:

Very cute and a nice seasonal slice of life. A follow-up for New Years' might be fun.

A nice little story. I enjoyed it.

Cool story bro.

This was way to good. I would love to see more Rarity stuff from you in the future.

Well, I'd say you succeed.

This gave me cavities.

ROBCakeran53
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Only complaint, if any, is that your transition between Rainbow and Anon going from inside the house to the snowball fight, then the one when he falls asleep and wakes up, were very sudden writing wise. Could have broken those moments up into paragraphs.

Still, the mental image of Noodle Dash are hilarious. I'mma have to remember that one.

Great story. Great writing. I love these more relaxed fic's, not muddled with fancy words and theories. Just real emotions, feelings, and adorable technicolored ponies.

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