Frank Frederickson, known as the human who arrived at Equestria and revolutionized music, besides having befriended a particular group of ponies and other mythological creatures, begins to live his last days on Equestria after knowing he'll die. At the same time, he'll make the most effort to amend some errors from the past.
Authors Note: This is my last attempt of writing a story here, in FIMFiction. Please, don't be like other occasions and give this story an opportunity before judging it. Well, now you know this is not my last attempt since I already wrote other stories, but please, don't dislike stories you haven't read. After all, you may like them if you give them the opportunity.
P.S: "Human" tag because of the principal character, who is the OC of this story.
Not bad, but you do have some errors here and there. I do think this could turn out good, but you would need to get an editor and hammer out some of the kinks.
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Alright, but I don't have money to pay an editor.
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Uh huh, well you could look in the 'looking for editors' group, while a mixed bag you can find someone to edit for free.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors
But i wish you luck with the story, and ill keep an eye on it.
Can’t wait to see where this goes, cuz you have me hooked!
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I just hope everyone likes the development of this story, I'll admit something... in some parts, the story is a little... *How should I put this?* ...Rushed.
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Eh, we all have those moments in writing. It’ll work out in the end though, trust me.
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Wow... thank you, I actually haven't thought about it, so... yeah, thank you so much. I just hope you'll all enjoy this story.
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By the way, a new chapter coming in a few hours, I hope you'll enjoy it as I enjoyed writing it. Title - Chapter 2: Telling the Truth.
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Don’t mention it! Also, can’t wait for the next chap!
Can't wait for the next chapter. You got me hooked on this story.
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Done and... DONE. New chapter uploaded.
The feels are real.
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Really?
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Indeed, I’d say you’re doing a splendid job so far!
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Thank you. I have to ask you, do you want me to upload a new chapter today or tomorrow?
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It’s entirely up to you. After all, this is your story, and I can be patient for a good story.
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Thank you for understanding. I just wanted to upload an extra chapter, but I read it 3 times and it was... the worst thing I could have ever written in my life. So, knowing that people wouldn't like it, I deleted it.
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That‘s the way it is for us writers, review review review. But hey, you’ll do good, don’t worry.
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Yeah, but still, I think it is best for this story to delete that chapter. I tried to make it better, but it became worse than before.
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We can only learn from our mistakes to better improve ourselves. Again, you’ll get it with time!
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Thank you.
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Don’t mention it! After all, I’m here for the support of others!
*Thumbs up*
I surely hope you meant passed out. Passed away means he just died.
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Oh, sorry... I'm not the best one writing in English.
Character development, I love it!
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Thank you, I wanted to make both of them be seen as REAL people, which have suffered, but (unfortunately) some may have suffered even more than others.
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It good to both show and acknowledge this, for it makes a great writer.
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Thank you, I appreciate that.
Don’t you dare put me in the feels
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I think I didn't get it. (I know, my reaction is disappointing). Could you, or someone, please explain to me what The_Lone_Courier meant?
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'the feels' is a slangish way of expressing emotions. Particularly sadness or joy. More often it's used in an environment for fictional characters.
Mr.The_Lone_courier is requesting that you don't make him feel those emotions.
(sorry if it's a crummy explanation, but I'm on break @ work)
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Oh, now I get it. I'm sorry if someone's mad at knowing that I'm not the best understanding certain phrases.
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However, talking about the story. Do you like it?
If the main OCs in this story had voice actors, who would they be?
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Why are you asking that?
This is a amazing story
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Thank you, I appreciate it.
The Fallout references are real! Loved the songs and how this entire story played out! Thank you for an amazing read! And thank you for the feels.
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War... War Never Changes.
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The more I hear the Fallout songs and Fallout Equestria fan songs, the more I want to rewrite my Fallout Equestria story.
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Since the dawn of human kind, when our ancestors first discovered the killing power of rock and bone, blood has been spilled in the name of everything. From God, to justice, to simple psychotic rage.
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Ahh... Fallout 3. It's a shame I never played any of the games. Although, I love the story and Fallout Equestria's story is awesome!
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Indeed!
Really like this story. I could work with you on this as well. Make sure it's the best it can be. I wouldn't ask for much (e.g. at all.)
My heart strings, oh how I loved this! Also, just to add some more emotion to this, take a listen to The Last Goodbye by Billy Boyd, it perfectly fits this.
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Okay, I'll listen to it. And thank you for reading my story.
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No problem! I enjoyed it very much and can’t wait to read more like it!
Reminds me of my current state right now. Good story though! Love it!