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Jordan179


I'm a long time science fiction and animation fan who stumbled into My Little Pony fandom and got caught -- I guess I'm a Brony Forever now.

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  • 167 weeks
    Shipping Sunset Shimmer with Sci-Twi

    I. A Tale of Two Shows When I wrote the few pieces of fiction I have set in the Equestria Girls side continuity, I wrote them from the assumption that Sunset Shimmer was heterosexual and passionate (though at first sexually-inexperienced, due to her youth at the time of entering the Humanoid world). Given this, my unfinished prequel (An Equestrian Gentlemare) was chiefly

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  • 177 weeks
    Generic Likely Equestrian Future

    This assumes a vanilla Equestrian future, rather than the specific one of the Shadow Wars Story Verse, though some of the comments apply to my SWSV as well. Generally, the SWSV Equestria advances faster than this, as can be seen by reference to the noted story.

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  • 209 weeks
    Rage Review: Resist and Bite (Chapter 17, Part A)

    Chapter 17: "Alicorn Combat"

    NARRATOR (yelling):AL-i-CORN COM-BAT!!!

    (Alicorn fighters appear on either side of the screen with their Health and Power bars)

    Sounds like Fightin' Herds to me!

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  • 213 weeks
    Rage Review: Resist and BIte (Chapter 16, Part B)

    Chapter 16: Slavery experience (Part B)

    It's the Slavery Experience! Get on board the ship for the onerous Middle Passage! Then get auctioned and sold away from all your friends and loved ones for a hopeless life of servitude!

    Wow, that got dark fast.


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  • 213 weeks
    Rage Review: Resist and Bite (Chapter 16, Part A)`

    Chapter 16: Slavery Experience (Part A)

    Charlie gets 1000 XP and goes up a level! He is now a Level 2 Slave!

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Apr
5th
2014

Completed "A Robust Solution" · 11:01am Apr 5th, 2014

This was an astonishingly difficult story to write, from an emotional perspective. I really like Fluttershy, and emotionally-torturing her even in retrospect was not a pleasant thing to do. It was essentially a sequel to Bad Horse's Fluttershy's Night Out and depicts Fluttershy's long-term reaction to what happened in that tale, around four your years after the fact. Obviously from my description, Fluttershy hasn't yet fully come to terms with the events, nor does she fully understand why they happened to her. The story is about Rarity having a talk with Fluttershy that Fluttershy's own mother really should have had with her at around age 12 or so, but which Sweetwing didn't have with her because Sweetwing was too busy being insane to deal with mundane matters such as telling her how to handle stallions.

I hope people like it -- it's a weird sort of combination of the extremely emotional and the extremely intellectual. But then, so are Rarity and Fluttershy, when you look past the beauty of those two mares.

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