All Alone Reviews

I have just posted the latest, and last, chapter of All Alone and, it being my first story I am personally disappointed in it, despite the support shown by its readers. I don't know if this is normal for an author finishing their first story or if it really is as bad as I think it is. I had originally intended for the story to be much longer and include a romantic subtext between Cloud and Luna (though I could never decide if Luna would return the feelings), but after finishing this latest chapter I felt that I should end the story there and leave it open for a possible sequel. I would like to hear what you all think of the story, tell me what you liked, what you didn't like, and where you think I can improve. I have another story in mind and I hope to make this one much better. Thank you for all your support and thank you in advance for the reviews. For those following me, I promise to do my best to make the next story even better.