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Jordan179


I'm a long time science fiction and animation fan who stumbled into My Little Pony fandom and got caught -- I guess I'm a Brony Forever now.

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    Generic Likely Equestrian Future

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  • 208 weeks
    Rage Review: Resist and Bite (Chapter 17, Part A)

    Chapter 17: "Alicorn Combat"

    NARRATOR (yelling):AL-i-CORN COM-BAT!!!

    (Alicorn fighters appear on either side of the screen with their Health and Power bars)

    Sounds like Fightin' Herds to me!

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  • 212 weeks
    Rage Review: Resist and BIte (Chapter 16, Part B)

    Chapter 16: Slavery experience (Part B)

    It's the Slavery Experience! Get on board the ship for the onerous Middle Passage! Then get auctioned and sold away from all your friends and loved ones for a hopeless life of servitude!

    Wow, that got dark fast.


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  • 212 weeks
    Rage Review: Resist and Bite (Chapter 16, Part A)`

    Chapter 16: Slavery Experience (Part A)

    Charlie gets 1000 XP and goes up a level! He is now a Level 2 Slave!

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Oct
10th
2016

Changes to the Structure of Fools and Drunks · 2:59am Oct 10th, 2016

As fans of this story, in which Snips and Snails/Glittershell venture into the Everfree and become trapped by the Wraiths of Sunney Towne, may have noticed -- I have changed the structure of this story considerably. It was originally meant to be a novelette to novella with a short flashback in the middle; and has now become a novel with a novella-length flashback in the middle. Its current structure could be summarized as:

Fools and Drunks (incomplete, projected ~ 70K words)
Book I: Getting Into Trouble (complete, ~20K words), comprising 5 chapters;
Book II: Ruby of Sunney Towne (complete, ~ 16K words, comprising 4 chapters)
Book III. The Tragickal History of Sunney Towne (incomplete, with 4 published chapters of ~20K words, and 2 more projected chapters of ~ 8K words, comprising a planned length of 6 chapters with ~ 28K words).
Book IV. The Final Judgement (not yet started, projected at 3-5 chapters of a total ~ 12 - 24K words).

So the final length will be 19-21 chapters with a total of 76-88K words, or short to moderate novel length.

Discerning readers may notice that "The Doom Which Came To Sunney Towne" has been retitled "The Decline of Sunney Towne," since the actual Doom doesn't strike till the very end.

The tags are for the novel as a whole; Book III in particular is less comedy than tragedy, as one might imagine.

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Comments ( 1 )

¡Another good story I have not even started yet!:

90% of everything is garbage. Unfortunately, that leaves hundred of good authors on FiMFiction alone. With my schedule, I have an hour or at most 2 daily for reading stories. I shall try to read the aforementioned story before 2100.

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