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When you get blasted from a kingdom you've recently been invading, you would think that you'd either be dead or hurting bad but not gone. Well, "gone" is a relative word. In this case you would think they've died and it would be a time for others to shed tears but no, this isn't like that. By "gone" instead it means flung across dimensions and universes or something like that. Follow the story of a changeling in the world of Minecraft with a name to match the game. He's never really fit in with the rest of the changelings back home, preferring to build instead of pretend to be another pony, but in this land he gets to put his skills to the test as he teams up with the monsters to overcome the strange beings known as Players and Villagers. Will he ever get home? Does he want to get home? Only time will tell as he struggles to survive in a world seemingly devoid of love.

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Comments ( 60 )

Wow. Must say that I'm looking forward to where this will go! I do have one tiny complaint: "Craft Hammer"? I don't know... That was a bit cringeworthy for me. It's your story, though. Anyways, really liked what you have so far! It's also pretty funny. I could see more stories coming off of this one, like where the other Changelings went in their portals. Well, enough of my rambling! Keep it up!

2744490 Thanks for the support! Also I know the name is just kinda "ugh" but that's what I was honestly going for anyway since no one really knows what names are likely for changelings but given that we only really know that they tried to conquer Equestria so I figured giving him a name like that would be almost ironic.

Well done this is a story worth watching

'Well......................f**k.' Is exactly what i would think were i in his position. Hey, guess what? Followed!:pinkiehappy:

hmm

will we be fighting minecraft celebrities?

like yogscast or skydoesminecraft?

if you need any minecraft player names to use you can use my ign is logenhankins if you want I don't care

2756479 I actually don't know any real big names other than Notch, I figured if anything I'd make him the players' god or something. It seems pretty fitting since he made the game.

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go to youtube and search minecraft

those guys are BOSS

yogscast

sky

2756604 if you need any minecraft player names you can use mine if you want its logenhankins minecraft-skin.org/wp-content/uploads/2012/06/315.png is my skin and im the ender player

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I advice against using Notch as a god, because over 50% of Minecraft fanfictions, not just MLP stories, use that name in that exact context in my experience. Herobrine has also been overused in fanfiction. Be very careful when you namedrop those from the game.

2757968 Thanks for the warning, if I end up using him I'll try to do so sparingly or as much as I think I need. I don't intend to make him a real big thing though, he's just gonna be something the Players worship.

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The real issue is that most instantly roll their eyes and leave the fic. Have them however you feel comfortable, but beware that the Minecraft fandom has exhausted them about as far as they can go. The trick is to not make them boring.

nice! that was awesome! will we meet any other mobs?

2800323 yeah, i'm not really sure when but there will be more.

2800561 perhaps the changeling is looking for materials and finds a abandoned mineshaft

also have we seen enderman?

2758040 I say we should have the fans vote for who they think should be the ruler of the server

look up minecraft on youtube for ideas

2800566 I do plan on him getting in the mines soon and that was an enderman he saw so yes we have seen one. Also, I have no idea what a "ruler of the server" means, could you explain that one for me?

2800598 basically the server owner

2800614 Ah, if you guys want to vote over the name of the ruler I say go for it. I just don't want to use anyone's name without asking first.

2800695 i mean by that like famous youtube minecrafters

2889117 Oh, I promise more is coming, even if I have been distracted lately.

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ok this is just plain awesome i wish that was a mod that would put a player changeling in the game

also i would so help the changeling on this server also random slime is random

I have to say that this is a rather excellent story, and this is coming from another writer, I may not be quite at your level, ( view and like wise. ) but I can definitely spot a good story, and that is what this is. :moustache:

3354033 That's great to hear, thank you. This is my first real story I've written but I'm trying to do everything I can to make it great. I hope to continue satisfying you and everyone else who reads what I write.:yay:

3354097 I would also like to say that I saw no real flaws in the grammar, that's quite nice to see. Most of the stories I read are filled with them. :applecry:

3354104 Yeah, I tend to see those from time to time too. Most of the time they don't deter me but I still wish they'd get fixed. I've always tried to be as grammatically correct as possible so hopefully I shouldn't have any issues with that or spelling.

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why cant he just transform in to something small and just leave when the guards arent watching?

3373963 If you reread what had been stated earlier it said that none of his magics were working in cube land.

He's a good-hearted griefer. :pinkiecrazy: At least, he could be. :scootangel:

As an avid fan of both of what is incorporated in the story ( FIM and Minecraft. ) I have to say that I love this man, keep up the great work. :twilightsmile:

3485726 I plan to with a passion my friend. Thanks for sticking with me thus far.:yay:

peace between the monsters and the players? i like this plan, too bad most of the players wouldn't, heck im expecting the players to shoot them on sight...

i now feel that someone should make this into a minecraft machinima, if only i knew how

Creeper want peace? Screw peace, call Herobrine, he'd pwn all the players.

oh dear... looks like the players want to wipe out the only creatures left that know all of the cruelty that they brought to the monsters

if i was on this server

i would totally join the trio

someone make a mod of this and then make a server with the mod patch PLEASE

"His Highness", being the giant douche that he is, is going to set up an ambush.

Cobblestone, wooden planks, netherack, or dirt. Any of these will work, however based off of what he has done this chapter cobblestone is the only thing he would reasonably have a whole stack of. Another great chapter, I await the next chapter.

Does he know how he perma-killed Com's bro? I'm fairly sure I know, but does he?

4463316 Not yet, but he will.

How does he know that it is "Zombie" and not "a zombie"? Don't all zombies look the same?

4607572 While doing that to a regular zombie would be a great way to fake him out, I can't think of any real reason he'd hold a regular zombie for the others to see in front of the cave they hide out in during an attack on the trio. Yes, however, they do all look the same.

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If they all look the same, how does "the prince" know that he got the right zombie? Also, if he was dead, wouldn't he have despawned?

NOOO! ZOMBIE,why did you die? :fluttercry:

4609852 Let's just say the prince isn't normal, any more and I might be telling.

2964037 Step 1. Get the 'mine little pony' mod

step 2. Create/download/acquire changeling skin

Step 3. Apply said skin.
Congrats! You should now be a changeling!:rainbowdetermined2:


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