The death of a loved one is never easy, especially when you are destined to a life of immortality. In her time of loneliness, Twilight learns that no matter how lonely she may feel... she will never truly be alone.
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i usually tend to stay away from these type of stories,
but this was nice.
I call bull shit spike would never lave her
This was a nice story. Well done. Like and fav from me.
STAHP CRYIN PLEZ
also
Draconequus
It was quite the good story, but I see only very vague hints at any sort of romance. For people like me who offer a kiss on the cheek to close friends or family, one would believe the romance tag is unneeded. Might want to look back over the content of the story; 'sall I'm sayin'.
4072251
There should only be a vague amount of romance present, as this story is going to be a prequel to a future story I have in the planning
4072279 Ah, well then I'll keep an eye out.
4072279 Oooh, interesting. I look forward to seeing it.
This would be a hurt/comfort story if there was a tag like this...
Nicely done, although there are a few mistakes;
Is the most glaring one, should be Princess.
Try to replace the "..."'s with actual descriptions of what's going
on with the characters, like describe Twilight's emotions through
Luna's observation.
reading this after seeing the finale early.
well, actually...
I wonder how this story would play out if it followed the canon of the actual story with Celestia and Luna retiring and Twilight being the only ruler of Equestria. I think the ending would be the same except Luna and Twilight probably wouldn't meet for a couple days after her letter was sent, and instead of Twilight being at the everfree forest, it would probably be the balcony of the Castle or somewhere over Canterlot.
This story was amazing.