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Jumpy_The_Llama


Hi. I am a Brony. Yes. And I love this fandom. Great cannon, great non-cannon. One day I just wanted to add my creativity to the mix. I hope you like what I have to contribute.

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Fluttershy has agreed to accompany Discord to the Grand Galloping Gala.

Although they are attending the Gala as friends, Discord doesn’t mind at all and he is ecstatic about the evening.

“I was her personal chariot to the Grand Galloping Gala and although I could have teleported us there, I knew Fluttershy would enjoy the ride. She nodded off just a few miles into the journey and as she napped peacefully I spotted the Gala in the distance. We would be there very soon and the silence got me thinking about many things. Love, friendship, and the magic of a perfect night.”

Discord is adamant on making the night perfect for Fluttershy and if anypony gets in his way…chaos will reign on them 1000 fold.


This is my first Fanfiction so feedback is welcomed. :)

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Comments ( 24 )

Yes, I am a first time FimFic writer and yes this is a Fluttercord.
Hope you like it so far.
:twilightblush:

I also like Discord's idea of turning them all into ice sculptures. At least they will be able to keep the palace cool.

Haha nice.

I like it I can't wait to read more ^_^

Some minor grammatical errors other than that It's great
Also It's "what fun is there in making sense "

There are some minor spelling errors, but I like where this is going! Let me guess, they're gonna fall in love by the end of the night, right? LOL!:yay:

This does not appear to be a humanized fic, so you may want to consider changing your cover image. Some potential readers may be put off by the appearance that this is a humanized fic and not really notice the tags suggesting otherwise. There are a lot of Fluttercord pics out there, so you should be able to find something better.

Comment posted by Jumpy_The_Llama deleted May 31st, 2014

Great characterization. Discord's thought process is so Discord. However, a wee bit stark on the social commentary :applejackunsure: Buuuut, the character of Discord is so spot-on and enjoyable that I still would recommend this :pinkiehappy: Looking forward to another chapter! Also, love the cover.

Imma follow you. Cuz you show potential

Ship dat Fluttercord, ship it!

Oh, this is so cute! I'll definitely watch out for the next chapter. You have a few sentences you could have broken up, but it's still a really enjoyable and really fluffy read! I can't wait to see the rest! You did a good job for your first chapter of your first fic! Welcome to the fanfiction life! :pinkiehappy:

Interesting
1st chapter and I aleady love it!

A your leaving me on tenter hooks, just on the first chapter. cant wait for more please update when you get a chance.

AHHH! LOVE IT!! :rainbowkiss: Besides some spelling errors and grammar errors, this has amazing written all over it. Loving Discord's character here xD I am a 100% Fluttercord shipper:heart:

Ah I love this! I hope you decide to carry this on as it is just perfect :twilightsmile:

“Because Discord, That doesn’t make any sense.”
“And what fun is there in making sense?”

He's got a valid point.

Good job so far, make sure you keep all your words in the same tense, you started going into past tense when Discord was describing fluttershy. I only found two words like that, but I wasn't really looking for any.:scootangel:

Dawwwww!!!!!!! Cuteness overload!!!!!!!! So much fluff!!!!! I love it!!!!! :rainbowkiss::raritystarry::pinkiehappy:

Soo.... You going to continue on this?
Ether way, it's amazing! I love the description and the way Discord behaves, which makes it sound a lot like himself.

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