• Member Since 17th Mar, 2014
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Stories are dreams on screen~

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Equinox writes to his best friend, Nocti. But why doesn't she write back? He's really, really sorry that she had that accident. But it wasn't his fault... was it?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

This looks really good. I cant read it now, but I look forward to it

hahaha
excuse my while I sit in a corner and cry

Why don't more people know about this story :raritydespair:
seriously its fabulous
although you did sort of switch pov's in there.
also, the last part was a little repetitive, and i felt like there was a little something missing.
also, there were some spelling mistakes that I'm not sure if they were intentional (since nox is (I'm guessing) pretty young)
there were a few other style issues, but nothing to big.
congratulations, this story is officially awesome

5141156 :twilightblush: thanks! I'll look it over.

Too bad I never feel emotions in these. If I could, I would be weeping

:fluttercry:sniff
good story, sad but good

Sad and again.

EDIT: Hm, guess I'll keep this one for now.

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