What would happen if James get's sent to a world filled with technicolor-ed ponies by Discord & is transformed into one of his favorite Pokemon, a zoroark? Some good comedy & a little mischievous tricks. Will James be able to get back home or will he be stuck as a zoroark in Equestria for good.
Not a pokemon fan but it's pretty good. Please continue with this story
Amazing as always wouldn't you say girls
it is fabulous
that was AWESOME
yay
that WAS AMAZING
you did a good job sugarcube
that was an interesting read
5799954 Hey, some people aren't, but i don't mind.
5800363 awww thanks everyone. I like this story as well.
i'm liking this ^_^ also ''OMG SOMETHING FELL THROUGH MY ROOF SCREAMING I T MUST BE A MONSTER KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!!!!!!!!!!'' lol
5801478 thank you & hahahahahahaa, that's funny!
5802732 :D
5802872 *thumbs up*
On a scale of one to ten how stupid is Twilight Sparkle in ignoring her own advice?
5807807 most likely a 5-8 on my scale.
5807807 but overall, she'll be suspicious of the bipedal fox (James) in the story.
Do you need an editor? The story is good but the spelling/grammar is detracting a little bit from my enjoyment.
5808008 If you'd like. Be my guest.
Hmmmm "Zoroark Zoroark" ( Oh shit)
5808040 *nods* "Zoro zoroark" (Yes indeed)
5808045 Zor-Zoroack-roack-zor-Zoroack? (Why are we talking in pokemon?)
5808066 *shrugs* zoro zor zoroark zor (this is just for fun)
5807944 Where is you quantifiable number?
Also, suspicion. The Zoroark was running AWAY. Tackling a runner is never a good idea!
5807813 There's the number!
Ah man, someone beat me to it. Great story so far. (Big Zoroark fan)
5808897 It's okay & thank you, & i am a huge Zoroark fan as well
Being a Pokémon fan and a Brony. I am really diggin this story. How do I end up in these places?
5821116 *shrug* I don't know, but thank you for liking my story
i am interested
"Zoro Zoroark Zoroark Zoroark" (i am enjoying this please update soon)
5822919 ok I will soon,& thank you
Amazing. Must have more!
Keep up the excellent work!
5912283 thank you I will have more posted soon. I am glad that you like it.
I'm loving this man! I shall wait for the next chapter to come out!
5935368 yea it'll take a while for me to make another chapter because of school & stuff. Sorry. & thank you as well.
Onward to the next chapter!
6101149 Okie Dokie Lokie !!!!
FINALLY AFTER ALL THIS SEARCHING, I'VE FINALLY FOUND A ZOROARK IN EQUESTRIA FIC!!! I COULD ALMOST SCREAM!!!
yaaaaaay
6162027 I'm glad you like it man.
I must have more, or somepony may get hurt... I mean, um, can you please continue this story
6162050 I know that feeling.
I give you a dislike. But today is opposite day, and if it wasn't I would upvote instead but either way is fine!
6280715 lol, looks like someone's feeling pinkish . Anyway thanks for the like.
6281679 this was a pretty good story to read. Need moar.
6281718 I know, I need to write more chapters.
6281787 chite more wrapters: I switch the ch and wr around.
6281849 Lmao
6281856 Lolololololol
wouldn't the illusion wear off after he fell asleep?
6299085 most likely, but fluttershy left before it does.
i like to see more plz
6300487 will do!
6300557
You still have your story labbled under haitus.
6302551 thank you, forgot about that.