when all that was left was ashes, she would again clothe herself in flame. Rising from the dust of her past to rekindle the spark of her future. She was a Phoenix, her own salvation; rebirthed, renewed, resurrected. L. Torenson an anon-a-miss tale
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This could lead to something interesting. And I like the way you portrayed Sunset. I look forward to seeing where this goes. Maybe I can get some inspiration for writing from it as well, hehe. It seems likely. Keep it up!
So she done taking crap from everyone? Good. hope she puts some in traction before she leaves.
Decent start. Now, let's see where this one will take us, shall we?
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Thank u! I hope u get ur inspiration to write.
8971469
Shes my fav. I thought what happened was wrong. Plus she seems to have anger issues. Witch i love.
8971564
Hopefully far lol. My vacation is coming up so lots of wirteing time.
I'm liking the begining, please continue it.
8972131
Wirteing chapter 2 during my lunch and breaks gotta do a bit of research of corse.
Loved it. Please continue
8972515
Dont worry already 200 words in just gota do a touch of research.
Considering some of the Anon-a-miss stories on the site, specifically the suicide and self-harm ones (though nothing against them), this feels quite in line with how Sunset would really act toward this situation.
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Thank you! That's what I thought. (although I do enjoy those to) she stubborn and proud. Sure she had a moment of self dought but shes to stubborn to go that easily.
*Looks At Summary* Uh......What?
This is gonna be good. A strong, if familiar setup. Beautiful and reasonable characterization. And, good writing. I’m on the edge of my seat waiting for more.
8975743
Thank you! Chapter 2 should be out spon hopefully a couple of days.
8975725
Sorry didn't mean to confuse you. I didmt like what i had prior so i used that quote since it fits perfectly in my opinion.
Interesting.... You have my attention
8976523
Thank you! I hope i can keep it the 2nd chapter is almost done. Hopefully up by monday or Tuesday depdeing on the wirteing gods and my best friend /editor.
8976660
You're welcome & can't wait to see how chapter 2 turns out.
Nice start can't wait to see the rest of it
8976939
Thank you!
This chapter could definitely use some extra editing, but this was way better than I thought it would be given the description. I am cautiously optimistic.
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I didn't get a beta till later
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Does this mean you're gonna come back and fix up the previous chapters? I don't really wanna read more instances of Chapter 2 just to get to something that has been proofread.