well goshlygoll, gonsider my bumkin spookled

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I fucking hate you, Posh. Go back to writing about tactical espionage action.

This is at least as good as I expected, if not better.

Moar pls.

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Give me a few nights! Chapter two isn't far off!

There's a lot of promise here. It's incredibly well-paced and certainly doesn't feel like the word-count it is. I just keep wanting more!