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Although he's reluctant at first, Anon accepts a rap battle proposed by Fluttershy.
Maybe he wouldn't have accepted it had he knew that chaos would ensue.


Collaboration with Chillbook1.
Mild swearing is used.

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Comments ( 22 )

Although I was directly involved in this, I feel no pig-headedness in saying that this is the greatest comedy piece I've ever been involved in. Jesus christ, this is hilarious!

Luz

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this seems like the sort of story someone would write back in 2011 (even with the cover art btw)

so at first Fluttershy was so assertive about a rap battle, even asked for advertisement, and after the battle she's like "did I do good...?" at the end?

idk dude but I think her character was really out of order

First up on the verse, turn you niggas to my sons.

Just imagine Fluttershy saying niggas.

hahah

7033738 I think you might be taking this a bit too seriously

Luz

7033745

then why would you post it? Do you honestly expect people to go "oh it's a random fic so it'll be filled with random jokes lol xD" all the time?

7033755 Maybe not all the time, but when they read a fic with the "Random" tag, I would think that a certain degree of absurdity and nonsense is implied

7033755 Well, it's comedy and random, so I don't know what I should expect. I posted it because it was supposed to be funny.
Sorry you don't see it that way.

the raps were awesome, nice job:moustache:

Dis is mlg m8 illuminati thumbs up

7033901 We spent a while on them, so I'm glad you enjoyed them.

7034230 *Plays "smoke weed everyday"*

7036613 One of my first thoughts as well ^^
7036428 Really nice rhymes at the end ;)

Stepping to me? Your face’ll get bashed.
You a couple of cents, I’m cold hard cash.
Thinking I’m brash? I’ll burn you to ash.
I’m quick with the words, my lyrics’ll smash.
I’m spittin this quicker than Rainbow Dash

So great :pinkiehappy:

7038978 That's Chillbook's line.
Man, this was a ride. All of it was fun, though.

They spitting straight fire

7040016 Yeah, I know. The others were not bad, but that one was just such a quick devastation I sat in front of my monitor and was like "OUUU!!!!" :rainbowlaugh:

To much, just way to much! I can't breath!! Send the medics!!! X_X

All I heard in my head is somebody in the crowd going "Awwwww shit nigga gtfo here and see this shit dawwwwwg":rainbowlaugh:

That was awesome! I'm not going to lie.
You had some parts in that that made me want to cry.
Not not cry with sadness, no that's silly,
Flutters was truly as cute as a little filly,

You think you can't rhyme, that you're not a rapper,
Then you haven't had a chance to hear me jabber,
I can't think of anything that cool or neat,
so I'll like this story, and give you a wink :raritywink:

7414014 Haha, that was nice. It's good to see people did like this story.

Also, thanks for the wink!

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