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Fluttershy develops a crush for another animal lover. Unfortunately, this guy is more interested in Sunset than he is in Fluttershy.

This isn't going to stand.

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Wow, look at you, Mr. Makeitrainoneshots. Didn't even know you started on this one. I rather enjoyed it. However, I should warn you now:

If you make fun of my inability to whistle one more 'gain, we are going to have both issues and problems. I will fight you, Conj.

"IT'S A TRAP!!!"
-Admiral Ackbar

7129764 *Drowns out complaints in whistle song*

*Starts to whistle while I work it*

7129791 I'm really tempted to make a bad joke here, but I'm going to refrain. Only because I know nothing about Star Trek or Wars, though.

I came across your story and found it relatively amusing, thanks for the chuckles.

By the way, the art you have is twilite-sparkleplz's Sunshynesketchtest, which you can find here on the artist's DeviantArt.

Yandere Fluttershy?

Poor Sunset. Poor Fluttershy, too. Guy seems like a jerk.

7130110 Both Thanks, and thank you!

7130513 Nope. It's definitely ketchup on her shirt...

Yep.

7130645 Guy's the worst.

Especially if you turn down Fluttershy. Nobody turns down Fluttershy.

7130925 Okay then... But why is she holding a kitchen knife?

Oh wait, I'm without my glasses. I must be seeing things.

7130927 Yup. You can't turn Flutters down. As a matter of fact, it was a picture of Flutterbat that got me intetested in the main series. A vampire pony! The embodyment of cuteness and badassness.

However, Sunset still my favorite character.

7130970 I think I've just realized how cool Sunset is. She's been in a lot of my recent stories and will probably be in more to come.

7130645 I'd say Fluttershy seems like the jerk here. If he's not interested in her he's not interested in her and trying to bully him and her friends to get her way isn't a great sign really.

7131335 Oh, she's not blameless either in all this. I'm just saying the guy's being very stupid and this'll end badly for her.

7131374 Hm, seems just a case of not interested or her interest is so subtle he didn't pick it up. It's Fluttershy, remember, not generally the bravest of ponies humans

7131575 Maybe, but guys can be massive idiots. I speak from experience, being a guy.

This was entertaining!

7129791 Women. There almost always a trap. Just like my friends gamer girlfriend.

good but needs a sequel

7162100 I don't know how, though...

7162131 here's an option if you want:
magnet tells fluttershy why he loves sunset and not her, then he leaves fluttershy and gets sunset.

Flutters is a wee bit OOC, don't you think?

7199011 Yeah, I can see that.

Great story! Have a like! :twilightsmile:

I love how everything worked out perfectly. Fluttershy got Magnet to go with her to the opening. Plus Magnet loves Sunset even more, so win-win!:yay:

Not bad but...

Fluttershy…”
“What is it, Sunset?”
“Are you angry?”
“I’m not angry.”
“I think you’re angry.”
“What makes you say that?”
“You’re choking Angel

…”

What? I'll admit, I never thought I see the day where she ever do that(in cannon). Was a little confused but otherwise not a bad story.

i actually feel sorry for angel after the way he treats her

Artwork is from twilite-sparkleplz at deviant art.

here is the page

“Now tell Magnet you hate him and that if you ever see him again, he should prepare for castration.”

What. The. [BEEP]! :pinkiegasp:

Dang. I actually like this kind of characterization of Fluttershy.

And by the way, to the dude that doesn't want Fluttershy...

You're dead, bro. Very, very dead.

No one rejects Flutters. No one. Her friends won't let him.

Yes, livid . That’s two degrees past pissed.

Missed this one.

Yeah. It's definitely beyond pissed. Yeesh.:twilightoops:

Oh my God. Fluttershy is hard core!

“You’re choking Angel…”

Ok, now there's something I never thought Fluttershy would do.

“He’s not worth it, anyway,” I said. “You can do much better.” Fluttershy turned away and patiently started sipping her drink. “F-Fine. I’ll do it. Not like it’s the first time I’ve turned someone down.” I walked away from the table and set off to find the guy that approached me earlier that day.

agreed, it'll just make everything worse.

The whistling is what caught my attention. Not his constant effort to lean against a wall while in front of me, nor his deliberate dropping of objects. Nope, it was the whistling. I can’t whistle. Why can’t I whistle?

I can't either.

Fluttershy’s face, right then and there, was one of pure melancholy.

poor fluttershy.

“Look,” I said. “I don’t want to go to your Wildlife Conservation thing, okay?” I turned away without seeking an answer and took off to find Fluttershy. By the time I got outside, however, she seemed to have vanished. It took a while to find her, but when I did, I found her sipping on a drink at a cafe downtown, choking Angel Bunny to death.

Kinda was expecting she'd go off crying this time. Guess not.

“Fluttershy…” he looked like he was thinking it over, then beamed. “Okay then. I’ll go ask her.”

That went better than I expected.

“Sadism and masochism,” he said while fidgeting slightly. “C-cause if you’re into that, you just got that much hotter...”

Nope, I change my mind about what I said. 😳

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