Dear Princess Celestia,
I’m going to make this brief.
So, I actually went through with what I said I was going to do in the last letter. I found Rainbow, asked her to go to dinner with me and waited for rejection. However, she didn’t yell at me or reject me: Nay, she simply smiled and said that she would love to. No begging, no crying, no bribery, no persuasion: She simply said yes.
The “date” went by without a hitch: Our conversations were just as lively as they were last time, and the food was actually edible. After we finished, we went back to the library: I wanted to invite Rainbow in, but she said that she couldn’t stay. Apparently, the weather patrol had to produce a massive storm at the break of dawn and Rainbow needed the rest. At first I was dejected about this, but then she said something that washed all the bitterness away.
“This was cool, Twilight. We should do it again. How does tomorrow sound?”
I couldn’t pounce on this opportunity fast enough: A primitive instinct grasped my head and made it bounce up and down in a vigorous nod. Rainbow did what she always did in these situations: A hearty chuckle and a heavy pat on the back.
“You’re such an egghead.”
She disappeared into the night sky, leaving me to blush in embarrassment, alone... or maybe it was a blush of an entirely different nature.
Could this be it, Princess?
Could this be love?
Your faithful student,
-Twilight Sparkle
I don't know why, but I'm really feeling this story right now.
Yes, that chapter is supposed to be 262 words long... Twilight's got some preparations to do
Also, this is my first time writing in first-person as well as stream-of-conscious, so... Yeah, it probably sucks
I want the Princesses reply!
!!
240933 this does not suck. Infact it gives the story depth and I can't wait to see how this will turn out
241088 I also want to see it!
240933
The story is good! A TwiDash story with a lot of development of their relationship? Its rare and I am liking it.
I also agree with Anonymo, Celestia's replies would be quite interesting.
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Dear Twilight Sparkle,
You fillyfooling heathen. I hear-by expel you from Canterlot Magic Academy. Never write to this address again
Nah, I may get around to adding in the replies from Celestia eventually, but that all depends on how many of these "letters" I add in
241277 you almost got me there
241277
Rofl, I loled.
I actualy love stream of concious writing, for me it makes stories more realistic as if I'm there when it happens. Love this story, keep up the good work.
Great for a short chapter. Nice work.
great story cant wait for the next chapter
Keep up the good work, I'm really liking this.
I. want. next. part. now. AI SED NAU!
What is this "love" you speak of? Is it something you eat?
240933 Preparations, eh? So Twilight's.. making a checklist?