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Yoni


Some men just want to watch the world burn. Me? I'll be standing at a safe distance with a marshmallow on a stick

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I accidentally revoked submission so I submitted the story again. please don't read if you already have and I'm apologizing in advance

No one had ever seen Anon without his clothes on. Not even the princesses. So they task Twilight to unravel the mystery. How will she fare? There's only one way to find out...

This story is a response for a blog post you can find here. This is pretty rushed so don't expect too much.

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Fuck you yoni10014:flutterrage::flutterrage:

this would have been interesting if the title and chapter name didn't give away the ending

That's all I have to say.

Awesome!

ah, good ol julian smith
good times I do eclare, good times

Probably one of the few Anon stories I'll ever only like.

I saw the post when it came out and I'm so glad someone just ran with the idea.

That ending oh god truly spectacular I applaud you sir.

ahhhhhhhh
ahhhhhhhh
ahhhhhhhh
I think i just cried.

5351782 That may have been an offer.

Congrats. I don't usually fave this kind of fic. It's too random for my tastes normally, but you pulled it off, so...faved!

Hilarious! Glad you did this for me.....And got more views in a day than any of my stories ever have.... not sure how to feel about that.

One thing I noticed.

too much, that it was not a big. But apparently, it was,

I think you meant "she didn't think that it was a big deal."

Awesome story bro! If I have anymore ideas I want to see, I'll be sure to come to you first!

Holy crap, I can't believe someone actually did this.

Holy Crap! You got featured!

Twilight had just put down the latter she just received from the princesses.

Letter? Just a thing I noticed
Awesome story and hillarious adaptation from that video. Keep it up!

rofl you actually did it! yes all of it.


glad you decided to make this story because of that post :rainbowlaugh:

What the hell did I just read. Fuck! I can't breath. :rainbowlaugh:

...... This was all a setup for the song, wasn't it?

Kudos to you, sir. :moustache:

"Applejack and Rainbow Dash almost chocked with laughter."

choked/choking (I think either is correct)

"I still can't believe I convinced Anon to play Strip poker, I don't even wearing anything!"

I'm not

Cool story, I can't even imagine the look on their faces seeing Anon doing something so ridiculous.

You know, this could make a much longer story. Not saying it was too short, as the ending was great, but this is material enough for a longer story. Great job :twilightsmile:

And a One, Two, One Two Three Four!

you make me laugh in a long time

Somehow this got featured. Huh.

Good job with the story, by the way.

7.8/10-Too much water.

You spoiled the entire twist at the end in the title/image.

I enjoyed that. :twilightsmile:

Anon is Julian Smith..... we've been so blind...

WHY IS THIS SO FUNNY???

Frinking awsome bro.:rainbowlaugh:

5355354 I have no idea

Aw man, this is awesome! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

And the best part is it isn't even one of those M-rated clopfics, either! Just pure hilarity instead!:rainbowlaugh:

That was pretty hilarious. Thanks for making me laugh.

'With this hoof, there's no way I can lose. I still can't believe I convinced Anon to play Strip poker, I'm not even wearing anything!'

This was hilarious, but... why do ponies even have Strip poker as a game? The only place they'd play it is at parties, and everyone would get... one hand?

Nice, saw the thread back when it was first posted.

Victory has been achieved

Suggestions:
Twilight was no stranger to Anon's reluctance to dispose of his clothes, yet she had never bothered with it too much, that it was not a big.
-big deal.

There's going to be games, and music, and scary stories and it's going to be awesome!
-There are going to be games

Luckily, Pinkie had a conveniently hidden stash of sleepover themed parties right next to the library.
- sleepover themed party accessories

"This is good!" he said after he swallowed, looking at a tray of cupcakes and moving towards another, but before he could snatch another one, Pinkie rushed to bring his a glass of punch,
-bring him a glass / his glass

There are other ways to strip Anon down, and she WILL succeed.
- There were
(to keep in past tense)

twad #38 · Dec 8th, 2014 · · ·

i was expecting anon to get a razor and shave Twi's fur off. She did lose the strip poker after all..

Hey wait a minute! Why isn't this published???
This is the first Anon story I like in good nature and it's not showing up in my bookshelf for Anon.

"Ha! Hanging out, good one Twilight." Pinkie chuckled as she approached the trapped alicorn on the wall and pulled her out with a comical SNAP noise.

As previously stated by Twilight, the hour was nine and two minutes, and the lavender unicorn was agitated by the lack of punctuality from a certain human.

Sooo... what race is Twilight supposed to be in this again?

Admit it: this entire story was just a setup for the song at the end.

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So... Anon is Julian Smith?

Twilight was no stranger to Anon's reluctance to dispose of his clothes, yet she had never bothered with it too much, that it was not a big.

Big deal HAA!! HAA!!! I MADE A FUNNY KIDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fluttershy must be taken to the nearest Ponicenter immediately as she has fainted.

"Admit it, Twilight," said Pinkie as she wiggled her eyebrows at Twilight "Deep down, you like the walk of that cock."

Someone's been getting their inner pirate on :eeyup:

5465280 It makes perfect sense! :pinkiegasp:

Oh my god... I'm glad someone took that challenge up on that post. I wanted to do it when it first came, but I was WAY to busy. But still, I'm gonna send this to one of my best friends and just troll her.

This needs a second chapter or a sequel.

5494199 I'm actually working on that. And it will feature a different song

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