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Gruvian Scripts
Bringing some class to perversion, but not too much.
Gruvian Scripts
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Pretty good. Just a couple of spelling errors I noticed. The major one being
. It's clitoris, or just clit.
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Thanks for the info, just fixed the big one.
I'm glad the spelling was not that bad. It's one of my biggest writing weakness.
That... wasn't nearly as cringe worthy as I thought it would be.
I'm not sorry.
7160677 Try writing it in a local word processor (Microsoft Word, Open Office Word, Libreoffice Write, etc...), they all have spellcheck, and will at the very least red-tag errors so you can look the word up in a dictionary. They don't catch grammatical errors (their, they're, there...) nearly as well though.
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Online processors (eg Google Docs) and any good web browsers have that functionality too.
7161379 supposedly, but I've never had them work properly.
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I use Firefox, and the only way it screws up is sometimes it forgets that I don't want American English as the default spellcheck language.
7161441 I have mine set to both American and British spellings (which took some work...) and it almost never redlines me.
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Why was I not aware of this song?
But seriously...
lol you got featured....slow day huh?
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Love this whole album lol
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Got some Skippy?
What the fuck does this even say?
This story was probably requested by Whitney Wisconsin.
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Shatner pauses?
7163791 once upon a time SciTwi put skippy on her cooter and let the purple puppy go to town. "For science" now she's hooked. But spike can talk now, and so its only a mater of time till that little asshole screws everything up and the whole town knows.
Well, now I´m reading this kind of stories.
...
I should be less prejudiced, this was fucking awesome! I really loved all the detail you put into every action and reaction; Twilight´s enthusiasm was the most enjoyable aspect of all. Great work, I hope you keep this up!
what the fuck
that's all i can say
what
the
fuck
This story asserts my theory that anything will a Mature & Sex tag combo will inevitably get featured and that's all that matters.
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Looking at the featured box these days is kind of like watching a speeding train smash through an orphanage.
7165237 No, it's nowhere near as fun as doing that. Watching all those ungrateful shits...
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Either way, seeing feature box being clogged up by cheap smut and fetish fics inspires nothing but pathos in me. Man, this fandom's something akin to a sinking ship.
7165481 This is true.
FUCKING CRACKED ME UP. But the first letter of "oh" should be capitalized, and "principle" should be "Principal", and
well
there are a lot of typos in the fic, and the description
But it's something to fap to! : D
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Glad you enjoyed. Working on two more chapters for this story.
Trust me, Twilight's enthusiasm, for completely scientific reasons, will remain.
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Yeah, Google Doc ain't the best best at catching potential grammar errors of that sort. Also has the weird habit of not catching obvious spelling errors on occasion as well. Like, ones it has watched before, but completely ignores.
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Good to know!
Can't wait for more.
Some typos
remove comma
the sight.
knot
wall / walls
remove?
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This comma feels okay actually. It's like a pause to try to find a good way to put it.
Here the only issues are an extra 'p' in "swiped", which may not be the best word for the position. Perhaps "swept" would be better. And the misspelling of "sheath" as "sheif".
Chapter two is out!
Enjoy, if that is ok with you.
...I love this...I know I likely should't, but I've shipped Twi and Spike in many other fics besides this one. Same thing there with the different species, so I know I should just roll with it. That said, that it's Sci-Twi and her Spike...somehow makes it hotter. Seriously, WHY IS IT SO HOT!?!? Also their interactions are adorable, and if they go through the mirror they might even manage a full-on relationship if that's where this is going.
Sorry, done ranting now. Good job!
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Because of the taboo effect. You know how whenever you're told not to do something you already wanted to do it just makes you want to do it more? Same thing here, only here it's your mind realizing that society frowns on it and says you shouldn't do it rather than having somebody tell you not to directly.
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...I studied psychology, I get that. Here's the thing, I've been on the internet a LONG time. I've seen all kind of fetish, simulated and otherwise...several of these things made me sick. Others I liked alot, but lack the skill or company to even come close to recreating. I've SEEN this fetish before, animated and not, and it has NEVER had this much appeal before! Seriously, not joking, hence my confusion. Maybe it's BECAUSE of who the characters are? Do I ship this TOO hard? I don't even know anymore!!
Ok, so I saw a few spelling errors in the fic and I though that I'll tell you.
It should be "fellatio"
"pornography"
Twilight here should be written with capital letter
Again, it should be "fellatio"
As for the fic itself... it's kinda weird. Not bad or anything but... well, your mind kinda is yelling "WTF are you reading a bestiality fic?" but at the same time, curiosity takes better of you.
Oh you tease
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Fixed those errors.
Thanks for the heads up.
Continue please :)
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There will be a chapter 3 to finish this up.
And, I'm also considering a bonus chapter as well.
Are you KIDDING ME?!
God I hope Rimming or Anal is next!
Wow that was blunt as hell.
Since they are incompatible that means no holding back.
Well, with them having dealt with magic, I'm just waiting for Twi to end up with puppies.
Sequel pleasssss!!!!!
7327016 this story is not done yet, wait until it's complete to ask for a sequel