Ever since she arrived in the human world, Sunset bullied and blackmailed her way to the top of the high school food chain. After her defeat at the Fall Formal, she was ready to be insulted and mistreated. She's stunned to find her classmates are actually being nice to her instead.
This FEELS like the animated show. I'm just fine with that!
But, something still feels off...
Now, for the big test: what will the CMCs do when the girls start spending time with Sunset?
Ok, we like a good change of place.
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Oooh, two good points.
I like this a lot, but your stories have taught me to be cautious... is there another shoe that is gonna drop... or is this story really as it seems?
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Its as it seems
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Honestly, I like that. In my opinion, there are way too few stories where Sunset is given the proper love and care she deserves to become redeemed.
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Same, I decided to do something different than what I normally do and see on this site regarding sunset
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Honestly, aside from the killing thing, which I have a theory on anyways, she really did seem like a normal bully in the first movie.
As for my theory, I think the corrupted magic from the element basically broke her mind and filled her with raw anger, making her attempt to kill the girls.
Even pre-redemption, Sunset does not seem like the type that would go as far as killing.
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That's what I always thought too. She never wanted to kill anyone
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I can already tell this will be another great story!
If it goes all the way to Rainbow Rocks, Pony Twi will be VERY happy to see how everyone treated Sunset, lol.
That is for the future though!
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Mhmmm. Plus I figured a nice chill story would help bring attention to all my other ones in general.
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Very smart!
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Or well, that's the hope at least lol
Ahh.
Now see, this is a good way Sunset and her story should have been handled. People actually making good on thier promise to be nice and help her learn about friendship.
Looking forward to seeing how long they can keep this up.
I am really liking this story a lot!
I also like how you touched on that fact that, just because they are trying to be friendly, doesn't mean they forgot what happened.
Controvertial ship? OOH
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Mhm. I hate that I actually thought this one lmao but once I get an idea, I can't help but run with it.
This is a fresh twist on post-demon encore Sunset. Lots of realism and nuances to be explored. Snice story by far!
Ok I like this
I'm gonna be honest, I don't care if Lyra and Bon Bon are dating.
Heck, I like to imagine an AU where they're more of a found family type of situation.
As for the actual chapter, I like that Sunset doesn't understand the note pass.
Did Sunset lie and say they weren't dating?
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buddy, finish reading what there is for your answer.
Hmm, I have a suspicious about the pairing now...
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Oh?
Reformed Sunset is one day in and already got a girl's number--wonder where that'll lead. Nice to see everyone work together to keep on eye on her... which could go either way at the moment, given the vagueness and questions surrounding the night of Fall Formal.
And excellent Trixie gag.
Oohhhhh, mystery guest arrival!
I feel like Iron Will is one of those gruff, intimidating people but actually a nice, quiet person when you get to know them. I feel like they're a character to be explored, considering they were name-dropped.
I like how to the point this story is.
If SD stands for what I think it does, I am correct on my theory of who this person is!
As for the missing home part, a nice, but sad, touch.
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Kind of with engineer here. There's only one person I know of with the initials SD. I'm not saying who
While I've never considered it, I love the idea of Sunset being a mechanic. Makes sense for her character.
Using her powers for good, I like it!
Duh to me.....now I know who SD is.
Call it. I mean seriously. Everyone keeps on forgetting that bon bon is just a nickname
What......OH, Sweetie Drops! I probably should've figured that out
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I definitely forgot
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If I remember correctly, both are her names
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Oh that's right Sweetie Drops was her name when she was working for S.M.l.L.E the name bonbon was just an alias
Chapter 4 comment.
I am also a fan of Lyra and bonbon, but I honestly know them from luck of the lyrics better. Hilarious fan project
So it sounds like the CMC are on much better terms with Sunset already!
Okay, we may have dodged a big emotional bullet here.
Maybe.
Possibly.
Wow.
Unexpected to have Bon Bon reference the Transformers movie. Nice twist!
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Mhm, watching DOTM rn
Uh-oh.
Hmm... Interesting...
Despicable Me was made by Illumination, not Disney
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Meh close enough lol
The enigma of the crush continues! And of course Shimmer, the villain, would watch SpongeBob. Love the irony.