So… What am I doing wrong here? · 11:46pm Aug 28th, 2023
Ok so… I have a third story that’s a continuation from the previous one “My Little Pony: Legends of Old and New” and it’s… not doing so well. I don’t know why. Is it because of the first chapter and the backstory I gave a certain character? Is it because of the writing in general? I just don’t know… maybe this will change as the story progresses but… I don’t see that happening for some reason.
This is just really messing with me, especially with everything that’s already going on. (Let’s just say things have not been going well for me for nearly over a month.) So, if you want, feel free to check out the story and tell me if you see something wrong that I don’t see.